Middle schoolers shouldn’t write fan fiction.

Rose can’t leave town when she needs to be prosecuted and sent to prison. For assault and battery. Come on.

ok, this entire story is unrealistic. for one, a therapist can NOT get with a client. if they believe they are getting to attached they would have the patient trasfered to a different therapist. actually this entire story just gave me the heebi jeebies. im sorry i usually try to find the positives in works like this but with this one i just cant.

plz update

This is the worst story I've ever read.
SMH.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OH MY FUCKING GOD THIS WHOLE SHIT SHOW IS SO FUCKING BAD HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA LMAOOOO THIS ENTIRE STORY IS SO BAD IT GAVE ME CANCER

Dude I can't get past how fucking terrible this story is hahaha it's honestly so fucking bad that it's funny. The writing, plot, setting, characters, just everything about it is just terrible. Just so ungodly bad.

But thanks for the laugh, I cried laughing. Please don't write any more stories. Lmao

BRUHH...WHAT THE FUCK LOL

That's stupid either she scared or not because if she was scared she wouldn't be playing with herself in the shower and have jasper join her

this story is effing insane!

Nobody's that forgiving especially if your so called best friend sleeps with your ex fiancé, beats you almost to death , gets pregnant by him an then comes crawling back to you for forgiveness and help. No one would help them after all that

I love the last line.
LOL I can just imagine everyone looking at her like she's crazy for a moment after the squeal and before her epiphany about baby birthdays.

Woah, slap happy Bella. Funny. In a strange twisted way

Craziest fanfic I've ever read

Worst twilight fanfic I have read so far.