Bella is being bullied left and right :/

I don't know if you are a child or if you are depicting the characters as such intensionally

Amazing and awesome. Loved it!

There are so many more commas than necessary. I feel like I'm reading the transcript of Christopher Walken reading the story.

Your writing is awkwardly flowery at times. Here's an example:

"I guess I'll see you in school on Monday, right?" she then wished to know.

I nodded, "Yeah, guess you will."

The "she then wished to know" should be dropped. It's unnecessary and makes the exchange awkwardly written.

This also could have used a brief editing period for grammar/spelling mistakes.

Thank you for a Beautiful story, and I wish you a Very Merry Christmas!

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I guess I've never had a friendship close enough/important enough to fight for like this (even fighting to force the friendship to remain even against the very person you're supposedly "friends" with). Honestly after how Jake acted I would have gladly dropped him like a hot potato and not given it another thought (other than maybe calling him a jerk in my mind from time to time). I guess I admire Bella's dedication (maybe? Not really but kinda?)? I don't think I'll be considering it a heartwarming moment is they get back to being friends though to whatever "pay off" this part of the story might have isn't going to do much for me I think.

Interesting...

Loved the story, thank you for it :) :) :) :)

great chapter

very good chapter

Generic is the word I would use to describe this fanfic. There is almost no plot and the majority of this "story" is nothing but fluff. Waste of time.

So much fluff, I'm getting giddy... Awesome story

I absolutely loved this story, loved everything about it. Just wow!