well that was good lets see what kakashi finds

Nice! more mind games for Sasuke and Kakashi leaves the village. I wonder, though, why Temari never wondered about Shikamaru's death? Oh well keep it up.

Nice, Danzo got his! Anyways keep up the good work.

well that was good just one thing when you do the w w when or the w what do this instead w-w-when or w-what ok

well that was good i hope kakashi doesn't get bad to him thanks can't wait for more

Well it's nice to see at least one person doesn't hate Naruto. Can't wait for the next chapter. keep up the good work.

Sweet chapter. Kinda funny how "evil" Naruto still acts like a child. I like it though. Keep up the good work and I'm keeping an eye out for the next chapter.

Really, really weird. I think you need to get a beta reader. It's so hard keeping up with whats going on with your bad grammar and countless spelling errors.

That was a pretty good story. I hope there's a sequel.

Hey! Great story so far! Needs some more chapters or a sequel.

It seems like this story would make an excellent prologue for a multichapter fic. I really enjoyed it and if you turned this fic into a multichapter fic, I'd most likely be following the story.