This was interesting never expected there was an "agreement",okay truth here, Jasper and Edward are never ever allowed to be with anyone else, before relationship hookups excepted, however I adored Seth so I make an exception, lol

Have to say I loved that! All of it! And it was so cleverly done with all the twists!
Good job!

Loved it! This was an awesome twist!

Well I can see I 'm not happy about this one. great writing thou. I 'm a jasper and Edward person.. So you should had seth name not Edwards. so I actual skimmed it. Sorry If I knew I would have not read it. So like I said it is a good one shot for seth and Jasper.. :)Leona

I should just read all your stuff. I am totally on a Darkira kick tonight. This was fun and hot. Thank you!

Awwwwww, I really liked this

I am glad Seth and Jasper have their happy ever after

in it's own twisted, fucked up way...

Great job!

twisting good time

Of course I expected E/J to throw down as soon as Alice went upstairs! The Seth lovin' was yummy and Jasper as an internet porn star is a VERY nice twist. I had to chuckle because at first I just kept picturing Emmett

(aka "Fetch")from QAF! TeeHee

Wow! What a great twist. Obviously CF kept popping into my mind, but seriously, well done!

Have I mentioned lately that I love you? :) Seth is my favorite and having him with Jasper? *THUD* Jasper in porn? Doing Jake and getting done by Seth? Damn woman, I don't think I can have my computer working with all the drool that is pooling around the keyboard right now! I wasn't expecting the twist at the end, but I really loved it. I would pay LOTS of money for access to this website if it were real. Think we could possibly convince Jackson to consider this? Although BooBoo is WAY too young and I can't say his name with a straight face anyway. Oh well, happy daydreams for a sucky day at work. As always, you're wonderful. *hugs*

That was fresh and original, very good! Though I usually prefer Jasper & Edward pairing, I liked this one too, quite much actually...

Did not see that twist coming at all! Very nice. Love all the behind the scenes glimpses of Jasper's secret life. Great job!

I enjoyed the story, and kinda figured Jasper was Hunter, but I'm a little confused about Alice and Jasper's relationship. Are they cohabitating friends? Lovers? Is Lara being raised with Jasper as his daughter?

You may have said, and I was just reading too quickly to notice, but I am a little confused. HTH.

That was an awesome twist. :)

Love the twist. Great story.