Chapter 1 of LofH

Oh, they have NO IDEA what they’re in for.

If it was a different Fire Nation school, Aang (or “Kuzon”) would’ve gotten an A for his answer to the question about Iroh alone. His answer perfectly described Iroh at that moment of clarity.

Sad without a doubt but admittedly totally deep.

For the Headband!

Great job with the paragraph breaks this chapter!
Love the White Lotus reference. They're everywhere!

Thank you for acknowledging the potential of creepy.

Adorable.

He figured it out.

Aang is such a bad actor.

So that's why On Ji is with Jerk Face!

Thought you might want to know, your paragraph breaks are a little off. You're supposed to break whenever a new character speaks or does a significant action.

Great job with characterization! I haven't forgotten once that "Kuzon" is really Aang. Usually I would.

When's the next update?

I don't think anyone outside Team Avatar or the Northern Water Tribe knows that Tui is dead and Yue is the new Moon Spirit.

The rebels leaving the fire nation is a huge step forward, but i hope we still focus on the mainland later

Viva la revolution! Go aang!

Ooh, the reference to emotional control from the face-eater makes a lot of sense.

Well, he DID ruthlessly destroy hundreds of naval ships with a tidal wave. At least that part's right, although it was half the ocean spirit as well.

This is absolutely phenomenal. Amazing storyline, I love how he gets to show off his awesomeness in gym and art. My favorite fan fiction of all times. Please continue this story! It’s amazing!