..a bit dark.

i wish there was more
please continue

Sad... There might be a after story where hiei tries to get her back?

I feel sorry for her...-votes on hiei being selfish- -

Okay saaaad kitties over here there better be a lighter follow up T.T

WTF? NOOOOOOOOOOOO. Hate you. Not cool man, not cool. But it was good...sorta. It was a bit too rushed for my taste but it was still good.

awe so sad. :(

u know i had a hart time reading it cause of mukuro and hiei...but aside from that it was a really good fanfiction. i felt the pain of both hiei and kagome. and both the charecters personality was perfect good job )

So sad! :[

But wonderfully written! You kept the characters' personalities, which is awesome. Even better? You didn't take away Hiei's ambitions and Kagome's need for affection. Both were shown in one of the most unfortunate situations, but without the story being too wordy or too vague.

~Moony3