| Reviews for The Inveigler |
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  Me chapter 15 . 4/30/2015 A perfect ending to a perfect story. 3333333333333 |
 HappyAuriga chapter 15 . 3/26/2014 Thank you for not making this fluffy. An intriguing tale, I liked it. |
| Luna LeBleu chapter 11 . 3/15/2012 I have read almost all of your stories and they are wonderful! However this one has a few minor flaws which makes me think you didn't use an editor? Like you said Ollivander's was in Hogsmeade and then Harry, Hermione and Ron talked about how harry was the last horcrux but then put it in as a revelation later. A little more editing after writing would make you a fantastic writer! You have a unique ability to take the same base story, (Draco and Hermione falling in love) and retell it over and over again with it being completely different yet still true to the characters. Don't stop writing you are awesome! |
| Guest chapter 15 . 10/9/2011 Good plotline, but the ending was rushed. I would draw out the story starting from the Hogwarts scene. And Hermione is a little too trusting compared to her canon self. Other than that, good job! |
| EmoPrincess21 chapter 1 . 2/13/2011 nice |
| ilovetivo chapter 2 . 2/8/2011 Its not silly its perfect! |
| ilovetivo chapter 1 . 2/8/2011 This has nothing to do with your story but nevertheless - I love Draco Malfoy! |
| Little Miss English Nerd chapter 15 . 2/7/2011 Cute! It's a little depressing how everything was revealed so cruelly, but I like it when things work themselves out in the end! Lovely story! :D |
| Little Miss English Nerd chapter 6 . 2/6/2011 NOOOOOOOOOOO! A two-timing spy? What has this world come to? :O I MUST read MORE! Very good story so far, though. :) |
| orion chapter 15 . 1/28/2011 this story is so wonderful. i love it. really. i love how draco and hermione still fit into each other's world even after all this time. this is perfect. kudos to you, writer! :) my favorite line: "I will spend a lifetime making it up to you." 3 |
| TruDivination chapter 6 . 1/27/2011 YAY! Someone finally killed Ron! YAY! Go Dramione! |
| Allonzytothetardis chapter 15 . 1/27/2011 *Bows down to your writing greatness* This is just the ending I was hoping for! :) I loved this story, and my thanks go out to you for the wonderful job you did with writing it. |
| TragicSlytherin chapter 14 . 1/19/2011 OF COURSE there ought to be an epilogue. Anyone who doesn't want one can just bloody well not read it. |
| rinanina101 chapter 14 . 1/15/2011 Wow! This was absolutely amazing! I saw the chapter title, and was all like, "No! She can't end it like this! NO!" But then, I read the A/N and was all like "Oh! Ok. Thank God!" This was purely magnificent and well written. I wish you'd write more chapters! |
| voldyismyfather chapter 14 . 1/15/2011 oooo love it zxxx |
