I feel like you really caught Dexter's character well here. I can definitely imagining this happening in the show.

This is great, I loved it!

This is a great scenario. I read a similar story where someone attacks Debra and Dexter is again forced to reveal his dark passenger in defense. But this is a great little moment in an alley.

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Adore!

Thanks, that was a really fun read. You really captured the tone (especially of the books).

Really good!

I really liked your story. Thank you for posting it.

This was a great read. It really seemed like you got into Dexter's head there. Thanks for the story!

you captured the tone of the dexter books really well. It was amazeing! this story was the very first dexter fanfic, I have EVER read that was actually really REALLY good!

this was excellent, i was giggling thru it, yes, people's reactions don't make sense, right? poor dex. keep writing.

I have to admit, I usually don't like first-person stories but this one may have changed my mind. A very excellent portrayal of Dexter, I could hear Michael C. Hall in my head.

Awesome story! Very descriptive.