ah it's kind of a shame that this story was never finished it was very enjoyable

Kaidan can suck my fat toes that fucking bastard

Wow. Not even two weeks ago, I'd never even given Shoker a chance. Now, thanks to you and a few other authors, this pairing is rapidly becoming one of my favorite pairs ever.
I hope you finish this someday. I live your Joker, he feels simultaneously stronger and more fragile than so many if the other versions of him that have been written.

Excellent Air Traffic control phraseology. You must know someone who talks to planes. I was married to a controller for 20 years 8)

This is a great Shoker fic, it's too bad it isn't finished. I won't give up hope, but two years is a long time for an update?

...And of course it was only after I wrote the review on chapter 23 that I saw that you'd written on your profile that you haven't given up your writing. My bad! Please keep going, I really love it! You write Joker incredibly well!

I really enjoyed this, it's a shame you didn't finish it :(

This is such a great FF! Why isn't it completed? After over two years? So sad.

Oh I just can't wait for Joker's confession of love! Golly I am such a freakin' romantic! It makes me giddy inside! In my playthrough as femshep I had tried in all three games to have a romantic relationship with the poor guy but, alas, to no avail. It pisses me off he fell in love with a stupid computer...

Great story

I like the way you describe Jacob. I agree with you. He's just too much. Too much of everything. Always was a bit creepy.

I came across your work on DA and followed it to this story. I have to say, I'm very impressed with your writing. It just sucks me in! It's been a while since you posted the last chapter, is it still active? It would be such a shame if it would end here...

Interesting story, one of the better renditions of the 'shoker' story. Just one suggestion, a little action would be nice. I know you are trying to show us the story behind the story... But a little action would be nice. Keep up the good work!

I agree with a previous reviewer that said that this fic deserves more reviews than it has. Thought I'd drop my few pennies in, too.

The fact that I read every characters part in their voice shows, to me, how well you have their personalities and dialogues down. You word things beautifully, with enough description to imagine things but not so much that you get bogged down and bored with it.

I've never felt so emotional while reading a fanfiction before, and I've been lurking on here since I was a pre-teen, so well done! I think!

I look forward to hopefully reading more. :)

This is excellent, want next chapter now I love it so much 3 please updatesoon .