omg thats so fuckinng hott :)

HOT! And unexpectedly sweet. I love your writing style-it's so...intelligent.

Sooo HOT!

OMG! I loved this story! I wish a scene like this actually happened on the show! I just want to know if you plan on writing a sequel to it? I really hope you do. I really hope you do. Your portrayal of Rachel and Puck is excellent and very much how they are on the show. I really hope you write a sequel.

This was so amazing! I really want to see a sequel to this, pretty please?

suuuuper hot, and sweet :)

PUCKLEBERRY FOREVER!

I quite enjoyed this :D

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Lauren

in a word, AMAZING.

Rachel's first time with Jesse is so true-to-life. Thanks for capturing the fact that not all first times are magical and even strong young women get talked into sex that doesn't quite feel right. Brava for capping it off with such sweet steaminess.

Aw he was so sweet. I wouldn't mind a sequel; after she broke up with Jesse; their real first time; Puck admitting he likes her- whichever. Great little one-shot.

this was awesome. Can we have a sequel? I want to know what happens next.

Awesome!

Love, love, love it! Everything about it. You captured Rachel's insecurity very well, and I love that Puck (typically the jerk) is the one to comfort her. Very sweet and really hot at the same time. It would be great if you wrote a follow-up...

Can I just clarify that I don't think Jesse would be that much of an ass,and in a weird masochistic way, I think he truely loved Rachel. But then that's my Jesse not yours.

Your Jesse... he's kind of a scumbag, but then at that age most teenage boys seem to be. You're Puck on the otherhand, well he's just a delicious character.

He's unlike whats usually assumed off him, a mystery to both Rachel and the reader. I honestly loved this story.

I liked the study of paradox's, Noah's a generally hard character yet everything about him with Rachel seems softer like she has the ability to buff away the brashness of his character, or maybe it's even Rachel's vulnerability that brings out the baser instincts in him. Whatever it was I loved it.

This stands out as a oneshot but I really think thiscould be an amazing story if you chose to continue it. Think about it?

Loved this!

The whole story of how Rachel lost her virginity and it's aftermath made my heart hurt. It's painful in every way, and it seems to strip her of all her defenses. And everything about her response just reminds us that she's alone. No dads, no friends except for an aborted attempt by Finn to find out what's wrong, and honestly, I don't think Jesse's words could have been more casually malicious if he'd thought it up for a month.

And then Puck turns up and in this story at least, I can only turn to the words of the great Jane Austen: "There certainly was some great mismanagement in the education of those two young men. One has got all the goodness, and the other all the appearance of it."

His words are kind of abrupt, but every time he touches her, he's gentle. And as seriously hot as this is, I keep coming back to that delicacy because Puck to me is a guy who speaks most clearly through his body. So for me this speaks of feelings he has that while they may not be of the 'one true forever love' variety (yet), are genuine.

This line was lovely: 'I'd...want to do this again if you wanted to.' He said, deeper, more huskily, like he was admitting to some deep, dark secret.

Could there possibly be more? Pretty please?