OMG! It's like watching a horror movie with all those ghosts and creepy winged things and some kind of disease which will just go straight into the heart and kill the person instantly! But good job! It gave me shivers!

OMG!

That was so scary!

Wow! It's amazing that you got inspired by Hilly! You should watch even more of her vids! And this made me get the shivers even though it's only a fan fiction!

...EPIC.

I is wanting an update.

O.O

HOW THE !$ % IS SHE MOVING!

xDDDDD

It's good, but one question.

Why do people hate her for her Healing Touch...?

Seriously... I'll be honest... This was absolutely awesome! ;) thumbs up!

I didn't really know what to think at first when I saw that because I had trouble understanding but I read it all, and it was very nice!

Victor is freakin' amazing, even screaming at the top of his lungs, I love it. And thumbs up for Cybil, our dear Iron Vixen, for being so supportive and so brave!

Chapter 8 is the sequel I believe?

I hope so! ;) Keep going!

"Frozen, tiny tear"? What is it?

~mf

;_; Aw, what a sad and dark chapter! I'm actually feeling sorry for Naomi. At least in the last moment of her life someone was kind to her. You made me love CR-S01 even more! The frozen tear could either be of sorrow that her life turned out this way or of joy that there was at least one person in the world who didn't see her as Delphi that Naomi's passed on, who knows where her soul would end up? Heaven? Hell? Purgitory, perhaps? Or maybe even reborn into another life!

I have this idea that has been pinging in my head for a while. I have always wondered how Maria became an orphan. I had thought that they were murdered and she watched it all while being hidden. And her bad temper might have been developed as away to cope with a cruel world.

As usual, I will look forward to more updates from you! :)

Wow, nice )

Now try and tackle this:

Mind-altering medicine that makes the victim go berserk.

-PXLight

CR! Don't let him get killed next chapter by Naomi! I don't like Naomi so you can kill her!

Is it healthy for me to NOT be disturbed by some of these? They're good. Well written, dark. Also brings up possibility scenarios for these guys to deal with.

Keep going! These are doing well!

Please make next chapter i need to see what happens

i think that your fanfiction is amazing love it can't wait for the next chapter write soon

Awww...Gaaaaaabe...

Though with all those cigarettes he smokes, it was inevitable.

*tearful*

~mf

Hey, great chapter Sounds interesting, though it's a shame that Gabe has to die

~PXLight~