Reviews for The Consequences of Revisiting
stevem1 chapter 8 . 7/19
This is a good story. I’m glad to see future Harry acting in cooperation, even if reluctant, with young Harry.

I do question some of the decision making. It is not love to have an adulterous affair. It’s fair to no one, it hurts everyone, and is completely wrong. If Harry and Hermione love each other, she should have left Ron. Instead she took away his chance for happiness and deceived him.

Future Harry taking control of Dumbledore was well deserved and constitutes a clear cut case of self-defense.

I like how the Weasley twins and the other champions are portrayed. I do think the manner in which Harry told Fleur is stupid and a 118 year old man should have a clear understanding that rules of decorum exist for a reason. The theory that ‘our friends who trust us would know nothing is going on, and no one else matters’ is an old lie that teenagers tell themselves. Adults learn that actions speak louder than words.

I have mixed feelings on how Snape is portrayed. On balance, I think the author did a good job.

Hope the author comes back to this someday.
Guest chapter 8 . 5/27
Please update! That's a FANTASTIC story!
UnknownVoid25 chapter 8 . 4/27
Hermione being with Ron was the greatest mistake in the whole series and everyone who disagrees with me can go blow themselves. His cons out weigh his pros by ten fold! This is a great story! I know ur still posting stories but are u going to continue with this? It’s really good!
Tracey Young chapter 8 . 3/3
You promised another chapter!
carryon chapter 8 . 12/17/2019
wow, I wasn’t sure expected for Harry to imperio Dumbledore.. somehow, that decision might turn to bite him in the ass. He definitely made an enemy of him. And if he escapes it.. But I loved every minute of your story. Can’t wait to see what you come up with.
Trebores1 chapter 4 . 10/31/2019
Tom Marvolo Riddle is not a Jr. His father’s name is Tom Riddle, his middle name came from his mother’s father’s name. TMR’s father was not named Tom Marvolo Riddle, but Tom Riddle.
hunzbookwyrm chapter 8 . 6/5/2019
Great start hope to see more soon.
iStyx chapter 7 . 5/20/2019
Jeez, that was disgusting. Krum challenged Harry to duel, but Hermione is blaming Harry and doesn't speak to him? The girl with insecurities and so-called smartest witch of her generation? Sorry, suspension of disbelief could stretch so far, I call bullshit on that contrived drama and whipped Harry who is ready to apologize for something that wasn't even his fault at all.
ArtimuosJackson chapter 3 . 10/14/2018
Well the series was based on viewpoint of Harry Potter so obviously he would see Slytherins in negative light like we used to when we are in school, I myself become friends with my enemy of that time during the exams of class 10th when he needed help because facing preparation of exams mostly in class 10 and 12 make us think about our future and that makes us mature which Harry never got because he never gave any indication of thinking about future and with Voldemort back it was impossible to have friends with Slytherin since he worried about taking down Voldemort rather than thinking about his future or stopping the childish feuds between him and Malfoy. Remember every children are like that in actual world and since we're not teenagers we can show everyone that we're matured but we always forget about our childhood which always brought up by our parents and friends to embarrass us
ArtimuosJackson chapter 2 . 10/14/2018
Well the series was based on viewpoint of Harry Potter so obviously he would see Slytherins in negative light like we used to when we are in school, I myself become friends with my enemy of that time during the exams of class 10th when he needed help because facing preparation of exams mostly in class 10 and 12 make us think about our future and that makes us mature which Harry never got because he never gave any indication of thinking about future and with Voldemort back it was impossible to have friends with Slytherin since he worried about taking down Voldemort rather than thinking about his future or stopping the childish feuds between him and Malfoy. Remember every children are like that in actual world and since we're not teenagers we can show everyone that we're matured but we always forget about our childhood which always brought up by our parents and friends to embarrass us.
Guest chapter 8 . 7/14/2018
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For the Greater Goat chapter 8 . 5/3/2018
The goblet of fire seems to be a Nexus point for fanfiction. That being said, the characterization for Krum is I think the closest to Canon.
Cilojenkins chapter 6 . 2/2/2018
That battle was fun to read.
Dave H chapter 3 . 4/25/2017
Would love to get apiece of those odds. Bet on all four and you can't lose! I'm thinking there's not much of a chance of a bookie taking you on! :)
Guest chapter 2 . 4/9/2017
Awesome as a lame with glasses
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