| Reviews for Severus |
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   sugarquills-and-lillies chapter 5 . 4/29/2011 Aw that was amazing. Really great how your writing goes along with the missing peices of the series. And i really felt for poor Serverus, seeing Lily happy with James when he loves her still. But yay for them, that was one of the most cutest of 'how-lily-and-james-got-together'. Now i really cant wait to read what's next! x. |
| Loslote chapter 5 . 4/28/2011 Oh, wow, that was...incredible, really. I love how you intertwine both stories...Severus went to Voldemort because of Lily, and he'll leave because of her, too. :) |
| Left Fanfiction chapter 4 . 4/25/2011 aaaaaaw :) perhaps he has a soul underneath all that hair... that's officially going in my book of favourite L/J quotes. |
| Doctor Clementine Who chapter 4 . 4/24/2011 Continue! |
| sugarquills-and-lillies chapter 4 . 4/24/2011 Beautiful chapter packed full of emotion. This definatley would fit right into the story-the event line is great. I liked the lily-forgiving-james part even though i love it when the two bicker. Cant wait to see where the story goes next. x. |
| sleepycup chapter 4 . 4/23/2011 Couldn't have been better. I enjoyed how you rewrote canon events with more flare and follow-ups. It's perfect. This could've fit right into the books! This story is a magnificent way of telling the story of James, Lily, and Severus with your own insights and views. To me, that's what Fanfiction's about. Can't wait for the next update. |
| missgeorgeweasley chapter 3 . 4/23/2011 didn't this happen in fifth year? but otherwise luvin it to tha max |
| WhiteCamellia chapter 4 . 4/22/2011 Ohhh...and the plot thickens. :) Excellent chapter! I loved it. You did a great job with the post-Owl scene! |
| Tribot chapter 4 . 4/22/2011 Snape's a buttmunch I like how you made Lily forgive James In some stories I've read, she gets extremely mad at him which isn't a bad thing, but I like it best when they get along :) |
| BlueSkies13 chapter 4 . 4/22/2011 Really good :)x |
| Loslote chapter 4 . 4/22/2011 This was a really kind of sad chapter, but the line "underneath all that hair" still made me smile. :P |
| wildwriterrr chapter 4 . 4/22/2011 Awhhh33 |
| Caramelized chapter 4 . 4/22/2011 Haha, "has a soul under all that hair". Love that line :). This isn't the usual light chapter, but I like how heavy it is, it really sets it back in the book, exactly how Lily felt. Good job! I can't wait to see the next one :) -xLychee |
| Foxtail-Padfoot chapter 4 . 4/22/2011 Another cahpter right outta the ballpark, beautiful. I think this was my favorite chapter so far in this one, because the emotion was so well-written. Can't wait for the next, dahlin'! Fox |
| Tribot chapter 3 . 4/17/2011 Got a crush snivelly? Little turd didn't even thank him Oh well, stupid snape bugs me, but he also is so pathetic that you have to feel sorry for him. |
