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The grammar could have been better, but it was only a mistake or two here and there. It wasn't too bad.

That was so cute! I love how IC they both were. That is just like Shizuo, honestly. I'm really happy to see his character written so well. You're a fantastic writer.

I hope you write another story of these two. There's never enough of them, and this was too damn sweet.

Naw, awesome D good english, cute story!

*fangasms* Shit~ that was an awesome story

So adorable! I'm so glad somebody made a fanfiction of one of my favorite couple! Keep up the good job. w

Aww! This couple needs a bigger fandom. Thanks for sharing! I really enjoyed reading this.

Awaaaaa!~ This is so adorable and I love how you potray their relationship

Continue to keep up the fantastic work!