Reviews for Not On Three
OnlyRiddle'sGirl chapter 1 . 4/24
Noooooo why
diamondnightskies chapter 1 . 9/30/2019
Wow. Couldn't have ended this little series any other way I suppose. It's excellent.
Perhentian chapter 1 . 7/9/2018
Who, this ending is so sad, but so right on another side. Thank you for writing and sharing those 5 OS, I enjoyed them a lot.
laelruin chapter 1 . 6/12/2018
Sad!
konchibi chapter 1 . 5/27/2018
oh my god!
the most epic ending of tomione fanfic i ever read!
i really love your writing style... but this ending of the fanfic is the most heart wrenching i ever read.
riabarro05 chapter 1 . 4/17/2018
Wow
labellily chapter 1 . 9/4/2017
:(
Catherine Morgenstern chapter 1 . 8/22/2017
"'You really should have been in Slytherin, you know.'"
She would've been a good fit, personality wise. I even think she would've thrived there if the majority of Slytherin House weren't bigoted arseholes.

"'[...] Hermione and I are ... reminiscing.'"
Somehow this simultaneously thrilled and chilled me.

"He wasn't Tom. Wasn't even close [...]."
Yes, yes, yes! They're two entirely different entities.

I enjoyed the part of him changing back into Tom and Hermione's uneasiness with seeing him like that very much. And the insinuations meant to play Harry and Mione against each other by creating distrust between them are very much in character, in my opinion. And that almost/sorta dance was extremely sinister.

"Tom's voice was quiet, but there was an edge to it that she was not used to, an edge which didn't suit the Tom that she had danced with all those years ago. It was an edge that belonged to Lord Voldemort."
Love, love, looooove this. So much. I'm jealous of your wording.

"'I'm not sure she wants me to let her go.'"
I wouldn't want him to let me go. The deadlier he is, the sexier he becomes.

"'What are you doing that for?'"
So Voldy! Unable to grasp human emotion.

The way you portrayed the effect of the Imperius curse is extremely well done.

I loved the conflict Hermione experienced when her Sectumsempra hit him and she realised he was going to bleed out on the floor.

I'm so glad you made him clarify that he is not in love with her. It would've been so OOC otherwise.

You couldn't have chosen a more fitting ending. I did tear up along with Hermione when he died.

Thank you for sharing this amazing series of one-shots with us!
I hope you're having a fabulous day.
Broweyesandhair chapter 1 . 7/25/2017
That's got to be a difficult position to be in. Great story!
Featha96 chapter 1 . 6/10/2017
I knew this eventually had to end, but I really wished it didn't have to. I loved your version of HermioneTom
piquant-eye chapter 1 . 12/18/2016
It's so twisted, I'm glad I got this in small doses :) But I'm addicted and it's the last part ...

You're a great writer. I really prefer your characterisation of Tom and Hermione over all the Tomiones I have read so far - you don't ignore the fact that he's a psycho! Yet somehow the not-quite-romance-but-wait-is-it-love is so achingly believable. Bravo
Guest chapter 1 . 11/23/2016
The ending is making me cry. It's so perfect and so cruel. I love it. The way you write Tom is perfect. Thank you.
Light on the Horizon chapter 1 . 7/20/2016
Exactly the right ending, though sad. I wonder what would happen to Hermione next, after people saw what happened in that battle. Great set of stories.
XxTaintedxDaggerxX chapter 1 . 3/20/2016
This can't be the end! There must be one last oneshot from this concluding the aftermath or something. The readers must know!
AnnaOxford chapter 1 . 9/21/2015
Damn, from fluff to tragedy.
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