| Reviews for Harry Potter and Fate's Foible |
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   x102reddragon chapter 5 . 7/11 Would have loved to see this fic finished. |
| AuroraBorealis chapter 5 . 6/21 goddamit. why. why must it end like this. this is freaking amazing. that twist had me on the edge of my seat And you! Haven’t! Updated! In like 8 years! NOOOOO! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/5 just as it was getting good i came to the end.. nooooooo! |
| Bergerac chapter 5 . 4/8 Harry's brother is a real prat as his parents also. The sister however is a real angel. This life debt is very well explained. Between the second and third task several month pass so Harry and Fleur will no doubt bond. Your a very good writer and you have imagination to match. Keep up the good work. Excelsior ! |
| nycnaya chapter 5 . 1/29 update plz |
| Tenjo chapter 3 . 5/5/2019 This story also drags on. You’re good when it comes to typos and punctuation, but it’s written in a way that makes it feel empty and dry, and needlessly tense. The scenes as well. The only reprieve from the tense scenes thus far has been that one scene which was so painfully out of character I had to snort. |
| Tenjo chapter 3 . 5/5/2019 Oh, so you’ve done BOTH of the things I hate in stories where James is an arse. Made everyone equally as stupid when they were justifiably mad over his idiocy and made everyone disregard his total lack of intelligence or care. You painted Harry as the estranged child, why is he ‘conspiringly smiling’ at him? Especially just after he was angry enough to scream at him not thirty minutes prior (not including time spent unconscious) and he still had yet to concede he put Rosie in danger and was acting like a dick. Inconsistent and annoying. |
| Tenjo chapter 2 . 5/5/2019 I never like the stories where James is an arse. Not because I like James, he’s easily one of my least favourite characters in the series; it’s because my head hurts reading the arguments where people have countless things to throw in his face to shut him up, but they never do and resort to his method of civil discussion. Namely, acting like a petulant child. |
| Addles28 chapter 5 . 5/5/2019 I'm interested... Plz Update. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/19/2019 Update this you bitch |
| HarryPotters1 chapter 5 . 11/13/2018 PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY! I AM HOOKED! Love your story! Your a FANTASTIC writer! |
| Ares26 chapter 5 . 10/1/2018 Awesome chapter! Harry is very honorable. When will the next chapter show up? |
| deathlyhallow0 chapter 1 . 7/4/2018 Please continue |
| ToddGilliss chapter 5 . 3/19/2018 6 years down, finals should be over by now |
| Ziltoid chapter 5 . 3/3/2018 Sad to see the story die a premature death here. And just when things seemed to start moving forward. A pity... |
