This story was really good, I liked how you deskribed their diffrent personalities.

You make Cissy sound so evil, and Andy too.

I love the fact that Ted was in the story!

First I thougth that Bella just was egocentred and had a bad day, but the last lines changed work!

I love it. The Black Family had always been my favorite and Sirius is my favorite character above all, so really, your story us definitely one of my favorites. Great job with writing all three of them. 3

I love this down to earth Andromeda, who can see her sisters and her family clearly. Lovely chapter, will look forward to Sirius' chapter!

Fantastic! I laughed on more than one occasion and still felt a little bit sad for them. Looking forward to more!

Rocky x

I'm sorry if I sound cruel but I liked the part about Bellatrix throwing rocks at cats! Because it was Andromeda was the one who said it was wrong, it kind of worked Bellatrix's slight ...insanity into the story.

I also liked when Bellatrix heard a girl talking about boys like Narcissa would and got even more homesick, and that Andromeda reads mystery books.

The letters at the end made me smile, it's almost like Bellatrix predicted Narcissa's life haha, and I can almost hear the age gap between Narcissa and Bellatrix in her second letter. Nice work, I'll look forward to seeing more!

Color me curious... :)