I love it! Everyone's so in character.

This is lovely! Favorites list the way!
Blessings,
Sophia

Wonderful! Simply wonderful! A very thoughtful piece ... to quote Aslan Himself, "Well Done."
~Mel

This is a really good story. I like the advice Aslan gave to Peter about caring or his sister, Susan.

Ah, I've finally gotten around to your backup account! I like this dialogue between Aslan and Peter, but I wonder why you placed it here when you kept the other Narnia piece on your main account. There were some impressive comments that really make a girl think, yet you seem to be skipping over the most important factor in the difference between Susan and her siblings: WHY she remained childish. No one seems to have a believable reasoning for it as far as I've found. I'm working on it, though. Maybe someday I'll get around to writing it...

The only thing that threw me for a loop is the name "Fairwither". Since she's a Talking Horse I am assuming you were referring to "withers" (a word which is never singular for some reason) instead of something fading or decaying...unless you went for some sort of oxymoron.

I burst into tears at the line about the filly. Wahh. Thank you for approaching Susan from a different angle. It's good.

Eeeeee! Aslan is so in-character! His dialogue is perfect! Susan's not in love with Caspian! Peter's not a brat! And you even mentioned the kids' school clothes! LOVE LOVE LOVE asdl;;e02o3;mda39!

...er. Sorry. Massive bookverse fansplosion there.