Reviews for Within Temptation |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh shit, oh shit, oh shit. Now it's getting interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh damn! poor violet...Not sure how Dante is going to take it he couldn't save her, and oh lord Alexa?! Yeah...she's going to flip |
![]() ![]() ![]() D: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! VIOLET! |
![]() ![]() Half expecting Nick to burst into flames and soar towards the heavens in wicked laughter. Vergil and Constantine would have been interesting mates |
![]() ![]() So suave and valiant Mr. Luscious. Which stars are viewable tonight |
![]() ![]() The cake! Violet's thoughts? The madness of it all? |
![]() ![]() Onward the Cheery soul prances that is friend. Onwards to destruction that is the Mr. Luscious. |
![]() ![]() Yowza, that's a doozy. Vengeance surely has a severe hangover effects. No heroine exists without a cheery doe eyed side kick. -Frozen reads minds so to speak. (Cue-The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly). |
![]() ![]() An adrenaline rush with an undertone of annoyance. Lovely |
![]() ![]() Well played dear Author. An intriguing beginning for a dark tale so it seems. My interest is peaked -let the games begin! |
![]() ![]() chapter 8 nightmare got its name from the song nightmare by avenge sevenfold |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too bad you didn't continue this lovely fanfiction. I'm so exited, I wanna know what comes next... I still hope for an update. Take care |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet! I absolutely love your story! Vergil's character is amazingly in character, and the necromance MC is a really cool chick, I would love to be her friend :D I hope you continue this story in the future. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh...the story thickens. Vergil croaked and he demanded, er... “asked” her to help him get his stuff back. I was a little surprised that she agreed so quickly, but then again, this is her area of expertise so it must be a common “job” for her. I'd probably tell him to stick it where the sun doesn't shine, and he'll probably...possess me or haunt me before forcing me to do so, so I'll be shit out of luck :) And how dare Vergil demand that she dye her hair to appease him; this guy is REALLY goof at crossing personal boundaries XD What a coincidence that we both have a character named Nathan in our stories 0_0, but your Nathan seems to have something else up his sleeve...like he was too eager to help her than chase her after she ran. If someone started running after I set up an appointment with them, I'd let them! :D I have some questions pertaining to this story, but I'm sure they'll be answered if I keep reading, so I'll see you down the line! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story (even though I only read three chapters 0_o). Alexa got seomthing up her sleeve doesn't she? Hmm... Was that little girl in cahoots with the demons or was Vergil being an evil little minx as usual? I'll say eveil little minx, especially when he told Alexa's friend to pick her up and she was outside his house?! Did I read that right? lol I mean, what if a dog came by and started chewing her up? ugh, Vergil you prick. |