Thank you for this story! It was amazing!

It is almost 4am, my heart is bursting, and I would not be able to stop reading this story even if my house was on fire

The cheesiness and sweetness of this story gave me cholesterol and diabetes. It was so damn OOC I feel like reading a Twilight story or something. Hermione was so weak, stupid, and wishy washy, and her self pity really gave me nausea. But at least the OOC Draco was okay. I manage to read them all the way (albeit skipping skipping skipping a LOT in many boring chapters), and even though the story's pace and discontinuity annoyed me (at first they were like pure best friends, but then suddenly they're already fell in love with each other since Hogwarts, even had kissed, blah blah blah), it was actually quite an achievement to make me at least read til the end.

Ooh~ it's awkward reading Hermione X Ron moment, I betray my Dramione heart

Sphewwwww finally. I really enjoyed this story. Loved the ending. Thank you for writing

This is one of my favorite chapters so far. I adore their relationship. I also love stories where Draco is brave. Very good chapter!

aaaaaand DONE! that was achingly beautiful! I am fully in love with this story! thank you so much for writing and sharing it with us!

i keep getting stuck at the very incorrect use of you'll.
two things bug me about this.
1) you intend to say 'you all' and the contraction for that is 'Y'all. (properally prounounced like 'wall' with a 'y' replacing the 'w'.) NOT 'you'll which means you will and is prounced like 'yule' very different.

and

2) the contracted form of the words 'You' and 'All' have no place technically in this story, as it is used almost exclusively in the american south, and some south africa as well. 'You guys' or 'Everyone' or another inclusive word/phrase is more accurate.
but 'Y'all does fill that gap of addressing a croud of people and excludind your self in one handy, fun-to-say word, that unfortunately has no place in this fanfic.

HOWEVER
that said. I am enjoying the story emensly regardless. wayyyy enough to overlook that one thing, and continue reading. Cause lets face it. obviously my grammer and spelling is not great either, and what YOU wrote is SO much more interesting!

also, i had to vent and proudly display my seemingly single point of grammer knowlede. that NEVER happens.

I live this Draco.

The 1st chapter is awesome

such a lovely sorry, l adored your Draco

Great story!

You'll you will
Y'all you all

It definitely takes me out of the story because i have to re-read the sentence with the correct wording. I we wry this story though so thank you for taking the time to write it and post it.

Not sure I'm a fan of this Hermione any more...

Loving the teddy bear softie ferret!