Great ending. There aren't enough stories that really explore the complicated relationship between Scott and Argent. Allison really is the tie that binds them.

Wow! This is great. I wasn;t that surprised to find there weren;'t that many AllisonxScott stories, but I still like this one! It's intriguing and is actually on point. I'm glad Mrs. Argent got a say in it:she didin't really show up much the first season. This was on point; way to go!

Loved, loved, loved this! Please, write more!

All right you are getting much better at showing over telling. I like the dialogue and at some point getting a full time beta is a good idea. I like the tension between Argent and Scott, but calling Argent "Hunter" can get confusing especially if you plan to add interactions with other hunters in the future. I ran into a similar problem with how to deal with Allison's dad. I call his is first name, his last name, or Allison's dad. Personally if he was the only Argent I would stick with that since is sounds the best but that proved to have its flaws as well. I like the idea that Scott is still challenging Argent and not cow towing to him. Keep writing.

Just read this, thought it was a Scott/Chris story and it's not. Sill and its pairings things.

Really good. I could feel the anguish that both of them had, both of them tried to bury.

Good Job.

Stabbed me in the heart you did. :( And that ending with the howl, chilling. Loved this, very bittersweet.

Yay! Very sad its over...but yay! I love the quietness in the ending, when Scott yields. It was painful and beautiful at the same time. Awesome work...

Grest story! I feel Scott's pain. Hopefully the follow-up will include Allison finding out about the deal and confronting Scott about making decisions about their relationship without consulting her -ending with them making up etc etc.

You're not gonna continue the story?

Please do! It's so interesting how you've focused on the interaction between Scott and Chris! And you've written the juxtaposition of werewolf-hunter and boy-father of girl relationships so well too!

Thanks for sharing the story and please continue!

This part came together beautifully. The dialogue between Scott and Chris is perfect with how they negotiate their deal even though neither of them are really on board with what they're dealing or what the parameters of the deal are. Great descriptions, especially with the use of the tree as a target and as a sign post. The ending paragraphs are just right, the perfect way to close out this story.

You know these hunters a lot of them are very bigoted, what gives them the right to decide who lives and who dies? Look at Kate she took matters into her own hands like a racist extremist and killed many innocent people a lot of them humans.

I personally think the hunters will be put on a backburner at the seasons go on to introduce a new main antagonist group probably supernaturals.

This is SO good! I can't wait for more.

I like the way that Mr Argent is conflicted. He knows Scott as a person and sort of likes him, but now he knows that Scott is a werewolf and he hunts them. Akward. ;)

Bravo! Bravo! I don't know what to say, but great work so far.

I've been waiting for a piece of decent and non-slashy fiction for this TV series. Thanks so much for bringing some good writing to the genre!

Love the fic so far. Curious to know how Scott will react to Chris's final line. I feel so bad for Scott in this fic!