Reviews for Return To Me Beloved |
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![]() ![]() ![]() awww..that's all? haha..sorry, i just wish there's more. like they're going to get married or something. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() I love your stories! They are amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome! |
![]() ![]() what a cool story I will love it if the writter can add more to the story it is so romantic who ever written this story if you plan to continue the story then keep up the awesome work cause the story was the best I had ever heard in my life |
![]() ![]() ![]() The R version is great! Mai and Naru are perfect! And I like Your other story just as much. I hope you continue to update it. :) |
![]() ![]() it was great I hope you make more! somewhat more wild :) And Id like Naru to have something like that too other girls Masako for something change! for my to be jealous or what :)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() liked it was little, it's more that i loved it! MAIxNARU forever! please UPDATE really soon! ;-) please UPDATE really soon! ;-) please UPDATE really soon! ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh! i love it and i would like more of this. i liked how Mai went all over to Naru to all her emotions, if he didn't got a punch like that guy he was really lucky. MAIxNARU forever! please UPDATE really soon! ;-) please UPDATE really soon! ;-) please UPDATE really soon! ;-) please UPDATE really soon! ;-) please UPDATE really soon! ;-) |
![]() ![]() wow that was so beautiful and cute at the same time lovely |
![]() ![]() ![]() The ending seemed a bit rushed... Go on do the alternative ending! D |
![]() ![]() ![]() do the r rated version do the r rated version |
![]() ![]() ![]() Makes me wonder how Naru reached that revelation. Oh well! Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was quite a cute one shot. I really liked it! Naru sure took a long time figuring out his feelings! At least he took the initiative at the end. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was quite a cute one shot. I really liked it! Naru sure took a long time figuring out his feelings! At least he took the initiative at the end. :) |