Love it!
Keep up the great work!

(So they tried to teach the boys empathy and sympathy, and all the others they used to have. Failing miserably in the process.)

so you spent a good chunk of time showing/explaining the boys didn't have the emotions and emotional responses they used do.

but then you:

( Sam walked out the door, crying a little )...(don't cry. It's okay, we're okay." Dean soothed,"I'm so monstrous now my friends will kill me, how is that okay?" Sam asked crying)...(Sammy, stop crying, please)

-but then you have sammy crying mentioned like 4 times.

-you never explain why the boys become different vampires than anybody else does when they turned.

This is really good! Normally I don't really like vampire stories but yours is amazing!

wow... so happy that dean and sam r togther.. love it