Reviews for What a Trip |
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Guest chapter 8 . 5/15/2016 PLZ UPDATE! |
kiyoki chapter 2 . 2/26/2014 This here is my life in retrospect, they call me fat and flabby because all my cousins in asia are fucking toothpicks that only eat one spoonfull for meals and never eat steak and when they say i'm fat, i just say IM FABULOUS AND CURVY PLUS THERE MORE TO LOVE BITCHES! But love the story so far...merp...(O30) (03O)(DANCE KIRBY DANCE!) |
xVentressx chapter 8 . 7/29/2013 I would like to see her with Itachi,because he seems to be the most...'fitable' with her he's an badass to:3 I see Kisame as an old brother of hers...and having her with him is just weird. Zetsu...is half plant...and an cannibal too...that's all I need to say. Kakuzu?...they got nothing in common and I don't think he's the kind of person to be attracted by somebody anyway. Sasori?...doesn't really have mushy feeling in himself. Deidara definently not. Hidan is just an BIG NO! Tobi is actually evil,too evil for her. So,ITACHI ALL THE WAY! I like the story so I hope you'll keep updating!XD |
Reka ryugamine chapter 8 . 7/25/2013 I think either the "human Shield" or sasori should be paired with ayano oh like your story by the way it's really good update when ya can don't rush it) |
Midnathething chapter 8 . 6/8/2013 Zetsu's line at the end XD That was just amazing. |
WarFlower chapter 7 . 6/1/2013 Once again, nice chapter. Deidara is an ass! _WarFlower |
WarFlower chapter 6 . 6/1/2013 Nice chapter again! _WarFlower |
WarFlower chapter 5 . 6/1/2013 This is really good. I love it. _WarFlower |
WarFlower chapter 4 . 6/1/2013 Now I'm thinking she should be with Kisame! _WarFlower |
WarFlower chapter 3 . 6/1/2013 Okay, I'm thinking either Hidan, Zetsu, or Tobi. 1. Hidan, listen to his mouth, listen to her mouth. Lol. Plus he is hawt. 2. Zetsu, they are so similar. She has a voice in her head, he has a spit personality (literally XD) and it would be nice to see him getting some love for a change! 3. Tobi, I love Obito/Madara fics. They are just awesome. The whole evil mastermind thing is cool and smexy. ... But Zetsu all the way _WarFlower |
WarFlower chapter 2 . 6/1/2013 Hm. Nice chapter! _WarFlower |
WarFlower chapter 1 . 6/1/2013 Is she for real fat or is she just imagining it? _WarFlower |
SaiyaCat chapter 8 . 6/1/2013 Awsome Chapter. Her meeting Sasori was cool. Itachi Kisame or Sasori.(regardless that he's a puppet). and i Agree with your opening author's note It shows you care. Thank You for the UpDate! |
Kyoki no Megami chapter 7 . 5/27/2013 haifisch; i like your story; concering my opinion on the whole "pairing" thing, ignoring that she hadn't really had enough interaction with them for me to form a solid opinion - i surely hope she won't end up with deidara, i hate him - and they don't seem to like each other that much either. itachi is overused, maybe something on a friend basis, i mean almost his entire life is arranged for him to sacrifice himself; but i guess he'd be acceptable. hidan, i dunno. i don't know your character enough for that, but i guess he could, too, be acceptable, but i imagine he'd like her to join jashinism. kisame is more like a big brother figure so far, though it could morph into flirty teasing, plus he's seldomly used. onto the next one, kakuzu - i actually don't have a clue about my opinion on him; he's one of my favorites but i don't know how compartible they would be; i'm thinking he'd like an older person, but she seems pretty mature...well, at least he isn't often used, too. zetsu, even less used, and he's one of my favs too - and she stated she'd been rather fascinated with his behaviour. then tobi... actually, i think tobi would be nice, he'd fit, plus i like evil masterminds, then again she's so nice (or does she only act like such a friendly person, and it's more polite, meaning how she acts around the kids and the father and stuff?), i think she's too nice for him. oh, almost forgot sasori here, hehe... he's hard. they don't even talk that much to each other as far as i see it, but he'd be an okay choice too... the character's kinda copartible. though he's a puppet... hm. we-ell, that was long. in order, i guess, 1. preferable choice - zetsu/sasori/tobi (in that order xD not sure what i'll press in the poll since that's one to much, and not sure if that order is definite) 2. okay choice - kakuzu/kisame/itachi/hidan (again, in that order, i admit, the popularity kinda has had an influence concering the placement, the first one borderline first-choice) 3. not even countable as choice - deidara gah. this is difficult. well, don't you have some sort of opinion on who to pair her with and some arguments for your order? would make it easier, the story is too short for me for a solid one ._. then again, looking at the reviewcount i don't think my vote will make much of a difference, but still xD i mean, it's an anonymous vote, technically you only need to convince the author as far as i see it, even more so if the readers choices should be almost evenly placed... thaaaaat all aside now, i've got to end this or you'll get a review as long as your chapter, i could ramble on and on and on and on and-*cough* hope you continue soon kyoki no megami maDAlexa p.s. somewhere up there you wrote how instead of hour when she plays with the kids, btw p.p.s. and the "what i'd see to happen" - i want some "bonding time" with the other members, as in, interaction (i mean, it could be just me, but i think zetsu and sasori only appear every few chapters with one line) or more of her thoughts about them. the charas with the most screen time are kisame and itachi, followed by the zombie combi |
CatalinaVonFeuer chapter 7 . 5/24/2013 Your fanfic is amazing and unique which I commend you for since it is hard to find stories that are different in their own way sometimes. You should definitely continue this fanfic because it has really caught my interest. I believe that Ayano should be with Kisame because if she happens to get together with Deidara then that would be odd because he is like her last boyfriend of which she really wanted to break up with and Kisame is cool and I have yet to read a great fanfic with romance for Kisame but other than that I won't really mind who she is with as long as it is not Deidara because of the way you portrayed him does not seem like it would work unless he is really cruel to the people that he is attracted to. All in all I love your story. |