This was the most horrible fix I ever read. It was so ooc for everyone. And please don't waste anyone time and play this as jane\lisbon if you make it another couple.

Thanks for the read I could not stop reading it off to bed now.

I'm so very glad you finished this because I just found it and it was hard to put down. Very well written, I had to keep reminding myself that I don't like Ardilles. You made him very likeable. And now I just want to go dancing.

I love that Jane corrects Rigsby on the difference between Scizhophrenia and Disassociative Identity Disorder, because people always confuse the two. Very good story so far. I'm holding out for some Jisbon )

Wow. Had read a few chapters then lost track of this. Rediscovered it and read it all at once. You had me going, fearing that Ardiles would prevail in the end. (Seriously disturbing given the show's finale last night.) Was very happy with how it turned out. And, BTW, you couldn't have picked a more suitable character for the sister. Really dislike her. Wonderful comeuppance. Thank you for writing it.

This calls for a sequel.

Right?

This is amazing! Not sure if I have reviewed in my other account in the past but whatever I'll just review again. Love the interactions between Lisbon, Jane and Ardilles. Normally I dislike relationship triangles but this one's really grabbed my attention. I'll have to admit I'd even feel sorry for Ardilles at the end if Jane manages to confess! Anyway, great writing and IC characters. :-)

I am sad to jane, but I also like the story with ardilles (strange!)
I hope soon to have new chapters ! i am a fan
Excuse my English

Awesome! Amazingly written! So sad, I cried for Jane. . . Please update soon!

Well...I can't believe I'm saying this, but I'm actually feeling sorry for Ardy and Lizzy. Of course, I still believe she and Jane should get together but...the former seem to have something good going on as well, lol. Can't wait to see how you're gonna turn this one around. :)

Oh dear - the day after not as good as the night before! Poor LIsbon and Ardilles. I'm actually coming to rather like him. Your POV with each of the characters worked nicely - and made me conect with all of the characters. Lisbon and Ardilles in her office - you could feel the tension, dissappointment and hesitation. And now Red John. Well done.

Jane... :'(

On one hand it's like aww, Ardiles and Lisbon so cute, but on the other hand, the heart aches for jisbon... T.T

OMG!
I love this!
This is so good, never seen any better, truly, I don't say that easily - best thing I ever read here.
Hope to read more soon!

Also, I have to ask. Are you a lawyer?