I'm disgusted by the love triangle with Jorah. I came to read about Daenaerys and Drogo only.

wow this story kinda suck dick, I thought it would be good and would be about khal drogo but he died all of a sudden

this story sucks. please change the plot into a happier ending

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

This story seemed so familiar to me and then it hit me. I wrote the same sort of stories in 6th grade, no plot, no scene setups, just one piece of action after another with almost zero context. It's like you wanted to skip all those boring talking scenes in game of thrones and just make a compilation of the action and fucking. Too bad you can't write action or fucking scenes to save your life. And don't mark a story as being about drogo if you aren't gonna actually make a story about drogo. Bruh I'm almost glad you couldn't be bothered to write chapters longer than the back of a shampoo bottle so I didn't have to read this story for too long.

This fic sucks

Great story but I think that dany would be more angry at jorah for taking advantage of her and the wall is a long way away from the free cities. Across from the free cities is dorne which is the opposite end of westerns. A journey like that would at at least six months.

Are you going to continue?

Holy shit! Viserys is dead!

I read the first few chapters and then skipped to the end. This is terrible, I don't understand why you even had Drogo alive. There is no way Dany would cheat on him with Jorah. I don't think you should bother with carrying this on. You clearly have no idea how to write scenes properly. Did you really think it was plausible for viserys to throw rhaego into the sea and Drogo would be fine with it?
Urgh I'm mad at myself for reading such crap

This is horribly written.

Why I oughta kill Viserys now! Wow, wow. That story was... wow. I am speechless at the moment. :O But I kinda liked it (except for this ending and Drogo) :'( Other than that, it was pretty good ;) I liked the way you wrote Daenerys with such a good personality like she has. :) Anyway, loved the story!

Oh good god! You had me seriously worried here! That Dany was gonna cheat on Drogo! I was getting ready to sob for the next nine chapters! D': Oh, but thank you! ! ! YAY! Wonderful story by the way ;)

Sorry but there's so much I hate about the storyline and very little that made sense in terms of characterisation and that i actually liked! Just awful...

That was interesting