checked out as soon as i saw the word "baka"

Nice

Very nice, very nice.

Man please continue this fic.

wow, really liked it. Better than having an ending with some love decleration.

Short and sweet one shot, kept in tune with there personalities even if there wasn't much talking.

this is a great story that is rather believable (in relation to fitting with canon)

great work!

Before this scene in the anime, I was like "Hey, maybe this is an anime where a pairing won't make or break it for me." Then this happened and I was like "NAZA FOREVER OFF TO FANFICTION!" And when I got here I noticed all the Jerza shit and was like "Dafuq?" Then did some reading on the Wiki and learned more about the story since I stopped in the middle of the Galuna Island arc, and learned of the whole ErzaxJellal clusterfuck and was like "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO-anime ruined."

awesome

The characters were right you got it right, good job.

Damn this was... sweet ... I mean natsu is a empty headed air head. Yet at times all throughout the story you get the feeling that their is a ton more thought that goes into his actions and that he is smarter than he lets on. I mean think about the enemies he has beaten. Yet despite that he hasn't won against erza. Its almost the perfect cover. Even if she is technically stronger than him he has moments when fighting an enemy that make him seem so much more powerful. Anyways nice story.

Type your review here...

That was one good one-shot. Well everything that is NaZa I'll love it. So yeah I hope this would have a sequel. I saw on your profile is 77% completed. Hopefully, a new one will be released soon. I'll be patient and always waiting of course. NaZa authors aren't really numerous so ..
Anyway, hope to see an update soon !

can you please make a sqeaul?squeal?

make more chapters