beautiful descriptions of bending and loved aang interacting with lin

This was really good!

Its spiderman!

I really enjoyed this story!

LOL same old Aang waning to do something fun

Fantastic! I'm a huge Lin fan and I think your representation of her was spot on! The way you phrased the action scenes, and the different words you used to describe the details made for a very interesting read. I could picture it all perfectly. The only criticism I have is a stupid pet peeve of mine... The last name is Beifong, not Bei Fong. Dumb thing for me to notice, I know, but that's how it is written and a lot of people seem to make the mistake. If you get a chance, check out my fics. My username is samararh3 )

Quite nice. Frankly, it sounds like something I would try in Lin' position, but only because I'm a total Spider-Man fan. I'll give it nine stars. Only because I don't give tens to one-shots.

-Sun is warm, grass is dead,
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Eeeeee I loved it! I loved the characters and how you describe Lin's feelings as she flew-it was simply amazing! I also like how you did the little Aang and Lin bit because not a lot of people write about how well they get along. Thanks for writing such a great piece! Cheers!

Wow I loved it! Though I would like to know how you think Toph would have responded to Lin almost getting herself killed. This was very sweet.

I really love this. Aang and Lin's interaction was fabulous!

I really enjoyed this. I mean, you displayed Aang and Lin perfectly, and I could clearly see that happening. Oh, and Toph as a parent, I sure she's that strict. Fantastic job.

This was excellent. I think it was a very interesting look into Lin Bei Fong, as she is quite the fascinating character. It was well written as well. Nice work here :)

This is great. I think the way you wrote child Lin was perfect! Toph and Aang were very good as well! You're very descriptive and you kept the story flowing. Awesome work:)

That was just perfection. Perfection.

This was great!