wow...amazing!

hot!

I really liked this story and, like the icing on a cake, this was the most romantic chapter. Awwww, I'm kinda sorry it had to end but I do understand. Thanks for a most unusual ride.

Awwww im so sad its over

Great job!

WOW!

Definitely an interesting read, and kept me involved from the beginning. I liked it very much.

Atie

great story well done

11 inches flaccid? Can we say overkill? You do know that penises get bigger as they get erect. Which means that erect, he'd be well over a foot long? That's just absurd. Go for a more realistic length next time, better yet, no exact measurements. Measurements just take away from the sexiness of the sex.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

PLEASE TELL ME THERE'S MORE AFTER THIS! OH GOD! *sobs*

Awww it made me cry! This is so good.

They SO need a happy ending.

Omfg I just love your fic. The sex and love and ship. I know a lot of people tell this to you but YOU ARE AWESOME J LOVE YOU! you know I can't wait for more. If you have more I mean but my god I will spread this to people and tell them this fic is fantastic. I've been trying to find fics like this. Thank you for existing!

Er. Me. Gerd.

*applause*

There's going to be a follow up story, or at least an epilogue chapter, right?!

no...the heartbreak...*le gasp*

please tell me that they're going to be together soon, and they'll stick together forever and ever and ever.

please?

Thankyou so much for liking this story, I'm happy this has got to so many of you (Was worrying about that) and just wanting to ake a note about my use of the word 'Cunt' in this and other chapters... it's just my simple belief that if you're going to talk about sex and be as graphic as I'm intending to be, you should be able to use all the words associated with the act and cunt is one such word. I'm very intentional to only use it when they're really getting at it (Sometimes I slip, we all do) so it's almost as though the point of no return for both of them is when that words dropped so I am sorry if it brings people out of the story for a moment, I swear since I won't normally be writing vaginal based smut it won't happen often, but it kinda fits this one.

and yes after this chapter I'll be working on something new, I was messaged some ideas I really truly like and I really want to try that Irishofsky story, but thankyou so so much from the bottom of my heart for liking this one.