Please update I love this it has all the right things make to make this narutostory one of the best

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Let me say you mate, your story is amazing. I Love's it. I beg you, don't let it die, from everything point of view this has an incredible future. English isn't muy first language, so i'm sorry if it's ununderstandable what I put here. At least I'm sure you'll know what I mean.

It would be a crosover with noblesse

of all the times. of all the freaking times to stop you do it here!?
on a completely different note I loved this. one of my favourites

Amazing Story!

i admit It this good
you made naruto a badass (not a borderline of evil which is good in this fanfic) but you made him harbour his frustrations like I mentioned in the first part with his money being deducted and things done to him which is literally abuse.
Not letting him vent that in this fanfic is sad. I am not say complete bashing but at least tell them they are stupid for either doing it (sasuke) or allow to be done to him
And for kakashi being his student yet learning nothing under him and writing a chapter or two about it is a waste truthfully I don't like kakashi.
And y you stopped when reaching such juicy level
My expectations are on this atleast someone (cough cough hiruzen cough)to get their heads caved in.
Pls comeback

DUDE RELEASE MORE CHAPTERS ITS SO FUCKING GOOD!

The over protectiveness is getting a little weird. I was hoping for an emotionally detached Naruto, not one who protects everyone, just with a bad attitude...

It's basically canon now with a slightly angrier Naruto.

Great job

I just want a story where Naruto is dark and stays dark, I fucking hate stories where he does for dark to I want to help and protect people fuck

Amazing

wow. Zabuza is stronger than normal here.

Awesome start.

YESS SASUKE, LOVEEEEE HIMMMM~