really good i love it

I really really enjoyed it!

Aww that's so heartbreaking! Make a sequel where he's actually alive but was held in captivity, being tortured and experimented on! Now! Lol. Thanks for this, it was good but super sad.

it's so sad :'(, but loved the end

Amazing, short but so sad!

You made me cry, but good job on the story!

*sobs* I is sad :'( Nicely Written though :)

So so so sad! It makes me want to cry to think of one of them dead. Not being able to be together anymore. :( Great story, but now I go cry!

D: Oh my gosh you just broke my heart. Ouch, Nicely done, I liked it. Good job.

I loved this It almost made me cry! But I think it would be good if you said how he died ! I know it's a one shot but just advice (:

Ok wow thanks for makin me bawl my eyes out