... where are the quotation marks?

Hey guys you're supposed to be giving constructive feedback! Don't just criticize the athor!

Wait... I'M THE HOKAGE'S SON!?

Ummmm

FIRst of all; the idea is great. Problem is the grammar, way you write it etc. writing “u” instead of “you” is already a bit meh.. but combined with horrendous writing of whats going on (more descriptions etc. would be nice!)... Well the idea was nice so thats something!

Please update soon

Please spell you correctly ;-;

Please make story longer

Please continue it. Maybe do some flashbacks to when naruto learned about his parents and his trainning.

This whole story is cringeworthy. USE QUOTATION MARKS.

to much happens at once
so your story suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuccccccccccccccccccccccccccccckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkksssssssssss

continue please

This is probably going to sound rude or cruel but, I dropped this story the moment I read "U" and realized there were no quotation marks. If you are going to be writer, even just for fun, the first step is proper grammar. It doesn't have to be perfect but there can certainly be no text talk in a story. Please don't waste my time. I was very interested in this story until then, and a second glance at it tells me you are a decent writer with unfortunate, deal-breaker habits. Please don't make a mockery of what I love by not putting in the time to improve yourself, if only marginally. Thank you.

Raj

Kyaaa! What happens next! Omg what if naruto uses this super crazy jutsu that takes the fire out in one go...and yeah...idk but pls update!

Why did you stop at three chapters its a great story so far i should continue it