Cool pairing. Great story.

And what didst thou call up, inhuman child, that you could Not Put Down?

Wow, that was . . . kind of beautiful.

Which Old One or Other was involved? Also, the most pure thing in humanity is it's impurity.

Brilliant and well-imagined. That last line struck a chord in me, though I wonder if you could have elaborated on this concept a bit? It has definite potential.

Pretty damned disturbing. I like it.

But wizards aren't part of the human race. Bellatrix lived and died Voldemort's servant.

This is really quite fantastic. You write beautifully.

Since Harry Potter is already a fantasy about magic, it's silly to judge wizards like humans like you do here. Anyway, this crossover has happened outside of fanfiction. There's a Harry Potter/Lovecraft T-shirt at Teefury.
By the way, before you call me a coward for posting an anonymous review, the computer I'm using can only do those.

Well, darling Avi, it's completely beautiful and confusing and kajsdflhbfKHBLDBHKFBDS and excuse me I have to go read it twenty sextillion more times so I can understand it and then I'll probably cry or something I dunno.

/Confused as hell. Kinda.

/More like confused as purgatory.

Make that one HP Lovecraft to add to my reading list.

Can I just say that I live your narration. It's so very you, somewhat reminiscent of Death in the Book Thief, and highly entertaining. The Others sound like a positively happy bunch, should we send them flowers?

/Fate is certain, the future is malleable./ I like that line. And for some reason it reminds me of Yoda, because of the whole future is liquid or whatever I horribly paraphrased.

I think you highlighted Bellatrix pretty well. Eh, now I remember why she gave me nightmares when I was little. Only that witch could nail puppies to the wall with a smile. That idea in my heads correlates well with the line about nothing coming back quite human.

So, yeah. Awkward review. Man, I'm off my game lately.

This is pretty damn beautiful, and you highlight Bellatrix's character wonderfully. She's always been one of my favorites - her obsession with Voldemort, her power, and yes, her insanity. This gives her a backstory that makes sense with her canonical actions while simultaneously making her sympathetic.

... am I reading the idea of Bella/Sybill correctly? Interesting ... I'll put this on my "to write" list.

Your prose is exquisite, and your grammar is perfect.

For me, I understood the beginning bit, and as the story progressed I got more and more confused. That's what I like about this story, though. It's not the sharp, concise "Good-or-bad" situation-which is not necessarily bad, just... Without any mind-food, even with the most exciting of action, it may get a bit dull.

I love how you show a flip side of Bellatrix, and yet it's still the same person. And. The contradictions. I LOVE THEM.

All in all, great job on this.
(I'll be coming back as soon as I'm in college to see if I can understand it fully.
Which means several years. XD I'll keep re-reading it, though.)

Also, I love the 'ending'.

/bad review is bad review