Perfect. Just perfect. Loved the way you wrote them, and adorned the ending. Thanks for writing :-)

I have to confess that there's this funny smile on my face as I read this. I really like this.

Gray have crush on Erza promise ti protact her tull the end so in the end they are together. Not like certain guy, worried like crazy about Erza like he cared but unable to protect her, in the end he walked with another girls, that is Jellal scarface the bastard LOL

I'm smiling so hard, I can't help it. My Grayza shipper heart is beating out of my chest. This was too lovely for words. Everything from the first scene, especially Gray just absent-mindlessly saying "no" she shouldn't cut her hair. This is such a perfect headcanon. How you mentioned Gray thinking Erza had pretty hair even from way back she first stepped into the guild with just rags, that was too adorable!

And Gray did a good cover-up saying her hair was cool, even though he explained using the fires of hell XD

And that pun! Classic! And my favorite lines in one shots are usually the last line. Good authors like you always manage to leave an impact with the last line that makes my heart flutter even more! 0

Thank you for this lovely one-shot. I really wish you could write more and I regret not being in the Fairy Tail fandom earlier to read this sooner.

Awesome job:)

wah! so cute!
I LOVE THE 'flames of hell' part. xD great comeback, Gray! xD

Wow I'm just wow that kinda hurts my heart a bit but it was perfect and I love it.

Oh, that was so cute, and amazing, I loved it X3

This is so nice! I really like this story a lot, because it's so Gray, and it's so Erza. It just fits THEM. You can see Gray's pride shining through the whole story, and Erza's very in-character, too. I'm happy you like to write GrayZa! There aren't a whole ton of us GrayZa authors out there, so we've gotta support each other, haha. You're really good! Please continue to write. :)

-RD :)

I love you.

I love you, and I love this, and I love GrayZa.

Nice story :D
GRAYZA FTW!

Make more grayza XD
This story is very cute&sweet

I love your stories x3 Keep the GrayZa coming their so adorable together and especially the way you make them in your stories!

please make more stories like this...