| Reviews for Starlit stage |
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   Shadow019 chapter 6 . 1/3/2013 Not Bad Bell |
| DarkMageDragon chapter 6 . 1/3/2013 4 words to describe how good this was Bell. Best! Sex Scene! EVEEERRRRRRR! ...Oh all time. XD Really good job you did Bell! I look forward to the next chapter! |
| Homeydaclown chapter 6 . 1/2/2013 Pretty good chapter, Scarlet! I can't wait for the next one! |
| CSC3 chapter 6 . 1/2/2013 WOW! That's all I got to say! This was an awesome chapter! |
| Lunerpet chapter 6 . 1/2/2013 Wow! Crazy birds and sexy lesbian cats with tentacles! this is the best Chapter yet Scarlet, their really in love huh? that's cute, even though I don't see Kitty into girls, Luna really isn't so this could very well happen, I mean she's into Catastrophe, so why not Kitty, although, I'm still a Kudley fan. |
| CSC3 chapter 5 . 12/3/2012 Pretty good, nice job! |
| Homeydaclown chapter 5 . 12/3/2012 Pretty good chapter, Scarlet! Can't wait to see what happens next! |
| Lunerpet chapter 5 . 12/3/2012 Wow, just crazy wow, I loved all of it, and I hope you put Mimi as a new OC, she looks hot! I love goth girls, the date was sweet and the action with Rozzie was awesome! good job Scarlet! |
| DarkMageDragon chapter 5 . 12/3/2012 WAit so Mimi actually made a life form? That is one smart cat! Very awesome chapter Bell! |
| DragoLord19D chapter 5 . 12/3/2012 As long as she doesn't pull a "I'm sorry, Hal" Mimi's FINE… Right? |
| DarkMageDragon chapter 4 . 11/8/2012 Awesome job with this fic Bell! Your really doing great with this! |
| Homeydaclown chapter 4 . 11/8/2012 Pretty good chapter, Scarlet! I loved it! |
| Lunerpet chapter 4 . 11/8/2012 Wow, nice new style Scarlet, I like it, and both Rozzie and Luna were perfect, best fic I've read other then my own, keep up the great work! |
| CSC3 chapter 4 . 11/8/2012 This is pretty good! Nice job here! |
| Rising Bashir chapter 3 . 10/31/2012 Not Bad. Cliches aside, this was better than I had imagined. The biggest problem I have is that you still do that thing where you don't separate dialogues. You have multiple characters speaking in the same paragraph, and I'll tell you that is one of the quickest ways to turn people away from your story. This is stuff people should have learned in Primary School. Also, the story feels a little rushed. Its nto good to drown us in pointless detail, but there are a lot of events that are given only the minimum wordage. Unless its something really repetitive, its nice to put some expansion in. But, not bad. Original Characters shipped with Canon characters are a powder keg for me, and often I find myself frothing with rage when I read stories involving them. Yours thankfully, does not fall into that catergory, though I would work on character development. This is a romance; do you find cardboard cutouts romantic? No? Then let's get to know these people. |
