Love it o(づ )づ

It's nice to see you're back :)

It may be short but it was nicely done. I like the concept and feel it can go in many directions. I don't think I've read a full story of Jack going down into the hole to save Pitch...

Still, your story is a nice introspective piece of semi-angst that a lot of people see in Jack or think he would be like. Nicely done!

The last line is great. I loved this drabble

Wow. I think this might be my favourite so far. You summed up so perfectly Jack's hurt and feelings of being useless. Amazing.

Glad to see you added another chapter :)

I like this one a lot. I'm glad that we moved into the phase where he has the Guardians in his life but this chapter still keeps the same tone as the others. I feel like you really got into Jack's head. Nice job.

Nice chapter, very enjoyable.

I love these drabbles! Character studies are always so facinating and you've hit all the points with Jack. Your writing flows beautifully and you capture emotion with ease. Thank you for posting this! Tiss a wonderful piece.

Very powerful stuff. I always admire writers that can hit you in the heart with so few words (and I appreciated the Radiohead reference in chapter 1, even though it might not have been intentional). I'd love to read more from you.

For some reason this story speaks something really powerful and provacative and I really like it.

I know they aren't directly related, but the initial of being completely depressing and introspective angst to the third one about finally being seen is interesting. They all have a somber and depressing tone but the subtle change is well done

They are more drabbly than an actual story but getting out these thoughts of Jack's is still interesting and if well done, quite compelling.

Each is written beautifully and I do hope you write one or two more. You don't need a series of 30, but a couple more couldn't hurt. Great work!

Dude I love your drabbles. All of them but I'm too lazy to post a review on every single one...yeah. If the next one is a sentence long I bet it'll be an amazing sentence.
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Very good.

Don't let that be true these are really great storys

How on earth can you write so well that I just want to sweep Jack up in a hug and not let go ever? You are making me cry, but I can't even be mad at you because this chapter was so deliciously sweet!

:) that was so sad but so good.

Yes, we liked it! Very sad but sweet, if you know what I mean. Melancholy but well-written.