Reviews for You Can't Hypnotise A Hypnotist |
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Munkeyfump20 chapter 3 . 9/6/2017 Cliff hanger well thanks for the read |
LouiseKurylo chapter 3 . 12/27/2016 Interesting, in-character, plus insights (Grace's conclusion about Jane from her O'Laughlin experience is original). Enjoyed it very much, though I wish you had completed the story. Thanks for the enjoyment. |
Unknown Voices chapter 3 . 2/6/2013 Oh! Please continue im hoping to hear more! |
Lauri3n chapter 3 . 12/23/2012 This is interesting! |
ngocquevt chapter 3 . 12/11/2012 The voices of different characters in a story really interest me! And although Jane got in trouble, it still seems light and humour and with a fast pace - those're what I like in a Mentalist fan fiction. Looking forward to your next chapter :) |
britfanatic76 chapter 2 . 12/9/2012 Great cliffhanger. I like the way you twisted it to Van Pelt's POV to emphasize the severity of the situation. I hope to see more soon. |
Guest chapter 2 . 11/30/2012 Intriguing. More please. |
Water-please chapter 2 . 11/30/2012 :-O Creepy! Frightening! You see, I can't even get a straight sentence out. I'm glad that you decided to write a sequel (thank you!), otherwise we wouldn't have had the chance to gape at the newest developments in your story. |
eblonde chapter 2 . 11/30/2012 Ohh! I'm so glad that you decided to continue this! I love it! please update soon. :) |
et voila 1312 chapter 1 . 11/29/2012 ho, ho, I like this. Interesting idea. I don't think I'd ever thought of her pulling a 'Jane' on him! (although she has done it before, in TCH, with that sweet homeless lady). Also using 1st person here is good; 3rdperson would not have worked. I too applaud her trying it, even if her attempt was a tad clumsy (yelling at him?) I hope you were planning to continue this. |
MerriWyllow chapter 1 . 11/29/2012 Nice way for Lisbon to turn the tables on Jane. |
Water-please chapter 1 . 11/29/2012 That was a close call - no pun intended. Love your story! |
eblonde chapter 1 . 11/29/2012 That was great! but I do wish you had made it into a multi-chapter. the idea of jisbon having to run around the Bush in search of reception to save Jane from bleeding to death is oddly intriguing. anyway great job :) |
666BloodyHell666 chapter 1 . 11/29/2012 that was good. can't wait for more if there is more |
Donnamour1969 chapter 1 . 11/29/2012 This was really good. I haven't read many Mentalist fics in first-person, but you seem to have Jane's voice down, and the banter was great. I hope you're planning to continue it, although it seems to be a one shot. I'll put this fic on alert because I'm an optimist. |