Reviews for Make Lemonade |
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Guest chapter 1 . 6/4/2016 God damn! That was a great fic, and I loved it! Keep up the good work! |
oldthelonglakeprincess chapter 1 . 12/27/2013 Mmhhmmm this was SMEXAH! Loved it! To tell you the truth, some smut writers don't have good quality writing, but you did really good on this one. I really knew what was going on and got the fullest out of it... annnd maybe died from blood loss XD Anyway, good job. Thoroughly enjoyed it |
The Crystal Pen chapter 1 . 2/13/2013 This was so very sexy! The ending was cute too. I honestly forgot about Demyx. |
WondererZero chapter 1 . 1/17/2013 This was soo amazing! Just perfect. It totally just completed my day. Please make a sequel for this, that would be perfect. Okay, so if you'll excuse me, I have a nosebleed to stop. ,, Cant wait to read more. |
nichijouevolution chapter 1 . 1/12/2013 Que lindo la historia!I love it! It was awesome! |
genesisluv98 chapter 1 . 1/2/2013 Woah, hands down best yaoi so far, nuff said :) |
bookworm4ever81 chapter 1 . 12/26/2012 Feliz Navidad! I love this story cuz you don't find a well written foursome anywhere. I'm a huge fan so keep writing cuz I'm a keep reading. |
kindofabadger chapter 1 . 12/25/2012 Aaaahhhhh! Such sweet, delicious lemonade! Unrealistic? Probably. Ridiculously hot? Absolutely! |
Sapphire Intensity chapter 1 . 12/25/2012 That was the hottest twincest/yaoi smut I have ever read. I like how the title is a pun too... because you practically made "lemon"-aide. I. Want. MORE! -TROLL FACE- |
xXUndertaker-19Xx chapter 1 . 12/25/2012 Awesome story! make a sequel to dis pleaseeeeeeeeeeee! |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2012 Go home Demyx, you're drunk. Merry Christmas! |
LovedLikeALoveSong chapter 1 . 12/24/2012 *drools* OH my fucking GOD! ABSOLUTE PERFECTION! On a side note: OH MY GOD! ABSOLUTE PERFECTION! |
SoRikuR0x chapter 1 . 12/24/2012 WHOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAA. EPICNESS! Dat was some hot stuffs man. ./. XDDDDD |
xXSoKuGirl0615Xx chapter 1 . 12/24/2012 To me this makes no sense to me... But oh well... I guess I love it if just down like the whole SoraxRoxas thing in here... But I guess it's aight :) still love you though |
luckycat222 chapter 1 . 12/24/2012 Approved. You dont even need approvel to love this insanely. Though I never though Sora would have it in him :3 |