Reviews for Forever and a Day
midlifecrissis chapter 9 . 9/6/2014
Still hoping for an update on this one too!
Kayah371 chapter 9 . 8/29/2014
I love this story so much. Please, update soon!
tapastapas chapter 9 . 3/2/2014
I loved this fic even though is made me cry. You have to update soon!
edu1e6 chapter 9 . 1/3/2014
Wow. Laid here crying. Please update. Ax
Sarahamanda Klaine chapter 9 . 10/30/2013
I like this chapter. It is a good chapter. Please update soon.
BowtiesandMusicals chapter 8 . 10/14/2013
Hi, I just wanted to say that I found your fic A World Full of Darkness the other day. That led me to this one. I really hope that you continue to add to this story. I really love both of these fics so hopefully you will find time to update them soon.
Socialbutterfly85 chapter 8 . 8/21/2013
I can't wait to see what college he got into. Please update soon. Thanks!
luvtheheaven chapter 7 . 8/14/2013
It's okay to have a funeral 2 weeks after a death. I don't get what your author's note at the beginning of chapter 7 was about.
Sarahamanda Klaine chapter 8 . 8/14/2013
I like this chapter. It is a good chapter. Please update soon.
luvtheheaven chapter 8 . 8/14/2013
This was a lovely new chapter. I hope you update really soon with chapter 9!
Guest chapter 7 . 3/21/2013
I'm really enjoying this story. I think you are doing a great job portraying Blaine's rollercoaster emotions. The faster the updates the better as far as I'm concerned!
luvtheheaven chapter 7 . 3/22/2013
I don't pick out every single one of your awkward sentences but another one here is:
"Kurt knew that although he did not believe in God, and that Blaine was spiritual at least, that his parents had been somewhat practicing Catholics. "

I mean maybe a better way of putting that middle sentiment would've been:

, and that Blaine was only spiritual at the most,

You know? Etc.

Also that paragraph is 1 really long run-on sentence. :P

I'll review the rest of the chapter when I review chapter 8!
luvtheheaven chapter 6 . 3/22/2013
Aw yay Blaine at school... I'm looking forward to reading this.

There were a few more grammatical errors/spelling errors/typo things, minor things... but things a beta might have helped with. I notice in may chapters of this fic, including this one, "you're" when you meant "your" and "they're" when you meant "their" but other things too like this sentence is really awkward:
"Sam and Finn stood behind him, Kurt's 'goons' as they had been called Blaine supposed, looking angry."
for example.

"Finn looked at him for another minute then patted Blaine on the shoulder lightly, he had made the mistake of hitting one of his hidden bruises already, and walking off."

Are you saying there was a moment a bit earlier, before that sentence, when Finn hit Blaine harder than that light pat but you didn't bring it up till then? Story-wise this part just seemed a bit odd to me. You know?

Anyway I think my favorite part was:
"Dude, I think if you ever talked to any of us like that when we were throwing you in the dumpsters, we would've been terrified!" Finn laughed a little.

But really the whole thing was just great. The end was so perfect too. All of it. And for once I don't think it's very predictable if Blaine's dad will wake up or not. I really don't know what's gonna happen.
luvtheheaven chapter 5 . 3/22/2013
I'm finally catching up on this fic of yours. You have quite a few minor spelling mistakes/typos/etc but all in all it is really impressive for a fic without a beta and it's really compelling! I just love all this angst and it's breaking my heart in such a good way. :P

And aw, they kissed! So sweet... it's all perfect and well done. A really strong chapter. Great job.
KKlever chapter 7 . 3/22/2013
Great great story! You made me cry! A lot! The story is so sad but great! Really great!
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