PLEASEEEEEEEE FINISH THIS STORY

Dude at least you could have shown the fight between Revan and Bastila from the game, this scene is really not a star wars scene.

You are going to continúe?

I hope you actually start writing this story again. It is the best one I have read so far and it is very intriguing. There is balance between the romance stuff, the action and the development of the story which I think is great especially whem I have read many other stories there authors focus too much on the romance part. To sum up I just love it.

hmmm is it possibly Satele Shan? if it is...then awesome!

HILARIOUS scene with Mira, Meetra, and Atton!

I'm really loving where this story is going, both on Meetra's side and Revan's side. But PLEASE, promise me that you will not give Revan and Meetra that TERRIBLE ending that SWTOR and the Revan novel gave them! KOTOR 1 and 2 are probably my two favorite Star Wars tales of all time (rivaled only by the films), and the MMO and novel did NOT give Revan and Meetra the justice that they deserve.

Wonderful start! I think you've perfectly captured Revan's motivation for joining the fight against the Mandalorians.

Fuck no I despise Atton/Meetra pairing.

Oh that deleted scene! Humorous heheheheheheheAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
In all seriousness you are one hardcore writer! Keep up the good work! Sory keeps readers hooked. (Sure did me) And... uhm.. everything looks fine!

AHAHAHAHAHaHAHAHAHAHA!
Could the next pregnancy be twins? It would be a bit more interesting.
Little innocent Meetra has been subjugated to the Talk. She's growing up, after twenty six years.

Bastla and Revan fight like an old married couple. Did you get the name from SW: The Force Unleashed?

...That last bit had me keeling over from laughter internally. This pairing is cute. I don't know why I think its cute, but it is. And Revan is still epic...and weird. But it's a good weird.

Maybe Revan should stop fucking Bastila. Then their problems would be solved

Great chapter! Would be nice to see a Revan/Meetra reunion.

Your writing wold flow much better if properly partitioned with commas. You'll see what I mean if you try it. On another note, (and this is pure opinion) the idea of Bastila being dependent on Revan's help, but thanks for mentioning the canon appearance.