Reviews for Hidden Sweets
CrazyShipper101 chapter 1 . 6/13
SO CUTE! It was sweet and so amazing that I think I have cavities now! I love and agree with the idea of Alfred always being hot and good-looking, because if we’re being honest, he is one damn fine piece of ass and kudos to Arthur for sneaking some peaks inI want some too! It was a great and fluffy story, thank you for it! Tho I do have one question, who is Alfred’s boss that encouraged Alfred to keep Arthur over night?
Lmb111514 chapter 1 . 2/12
I really liked the idea of this story; seeing how they got together and everything. Thank you for writing this!
randomfandomboredom chapter 1 . 2/19/2018
THIS I G. I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT SO MUCH.
Goog.lystrip chapter 1 . 1/20/2017
You like to think of him as good-looking because he IS good-looking. XD I definitely enjoyed it! A fanfic well done... or well-baked anyway. ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/5/2016
what happens when you already have diabetes?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
Aw, this is adorable. Here via Zepflerfer.
kwingard12 chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
So much perfect fluff. I love fluff. Thank you
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 8/28/2014
. . . and i was like . . . "WHERE'S THE SEQUEL ? ! ! I WANT MORE, DAMMIT !" and winning and sobbing.

Ugh . . . This is far too good to be stopped !

I want more and Alfred's POV at their first meeting ! ! !

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I Agree that Alfred is so Handsome All the time !
And Arthur is really Handsome (and Cute) in his eyes !

I read this fic and imagine their form with Rainy doujinshi/manga style. Handsome and Beautiful they would be !

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It melted my heart ! ! !

I Freaking in Love with this fic ! Fall in Love with it !

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I wonder if it's only me who wondering who was Arthur previous charming boyfriend. Even though he only mentioned once in the POV.

Just thinking, who would be the most perfect and charming between Alfred versus the person. Though I'm sure Arthur would vote to Alfred especially if he fall really deep to Alfred even though his ex was so nice to him.

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Awwww... geez! I really need more...!

Why Great fic like this have to be only One-shot?! *cursed*
west4242564 chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
Love it love it love it love it :D
Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2014
cute
Katherine A. Jones chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
I think I've read this 3 times now and it never gets old. Thank you for writing this!
Zeplerfer chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
Yes, yes this most certainly counts as fluff! Fluff is anything that makes you squee and sigh happily and just die from sheer cuteness, and this story did all of those things. It was the perfect blend of cynical / romantic Arthur. I've always imagined that both boys are super romantics at heart. (And the idea of "the one" being the person who can bake the perfect sweet pastries sounds very fairy tale-esque. I loved it!)

But you know, I think this story might need an R rating because your description of the pie is definitely food porn ;)
Corey5268 chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
"I am going to let the homosexuality rain down upon you and open your eyes in enlightenment" is a line that cracked me up.
hipsterJesus chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
i love this ahhh SO cute
xxalexisurgodxx chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
I absolutely love this. It was beautifully written (first person was a good choice for this) and well done. Everything was descriptive and their relationship is so sweet in this. I'm happy Arthur finally met someone!

In the author's note at the end- I totally agree with your view of Alfred. He seems to always be model-material when I write, perfect in every way. Arthur is good-looking in his own way that some people appreciate and some don't. Always cute though. c;

Thanks for writing this!
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