Aw, that's adorable. Shame he has to die in the end. You have a knack for making things like this interesting.

I am all for the Draluna idea. ;)

This is the perfect amount of PadmaCrabbe. It wasn't overly fluffy or romantic... that just wouldn't work with Crabbe. I loved their little conversation, and with every fic I read about them (which isn't many) I love them a lot, lot more. I know it's an odd pairing, but... yeah.

Anyway, well done, and thanks for writing my request. It made my day, truly :)

A fantastic job with them!

As my name suggests, I do like canon pairings more so than others, but I also don't mind a bit of Druna.

This was written really well, and I really enjoyed the scene you had them in. It's quite in-character for Luna to notice that Draco kept leaving there, and pick up the finer details. Harry followed him every once in a while, but he was more obsessed with trying to catch Draco in an act of evil, than anything else. Luna, on the other hand, would notice the little things.

Their conversation was very believable too, as was your characterisation. Luna is a very hard character to write, but you did it well, so kudos for that :)

I normally do point out spelling and grammar mistakes, but I didn't see any in yours, so I guess I can't do that. Your writing style, and the flow is lovely, and so easy to read. I really enjoyed it.

If I may make a suggestion for a pairing... so, it's going to sound strange, and a lot of people would cringe at the thought, but I wrote it for a challenge once, over at HPFC, and have loved it ever since. PadmaCrabbe. It sounds strange, I know, but it's good :P

Anywho, that's my suggestion. You don't have to write it haha.

Well done, Ima gonna follow this.