| Reviews for The Conversation |
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   Kruel'Yn chapter 1 . 4/29/2018 keep goiinnggg |
| Kruel'Yn chapter 1 . 4/29/2018 keep going |
| PurpleNightwing chapter 1 . 11/2/2016 are you going to update its 2016 |
| Ganjo chapter 5 . 7/29/2015 I could picture the action in this chapter and it was extraordinary. You have the Batfamily working together against a machine of Bruce's design. This story is very funny and I hope one day, you'll update this story. |
| Ganjo chapter 4 . 7/29/2015 A transforming Batmobile. That one is new. I got to say, since I read your other stories that mostly contain BatZee, I was expecting Diana's nightmare to be about them than the woman you brought in. Overall, the story is still hilarious and entertaining. |
| Ganjo chapter 3 . 7/29/2015 Nice interlude. The part with Wally was funny. I can't wait for Artemis vs Batman. |
| Ganjo chapter 2 . 7/29/2015 Sad for Ace's mother but I like what you did with his origin here. |
| Ganjo chapter 1 . 7/29/2015 From the published date, this looks to be like the first story you ever posted. It's hilarious and I couldn't stop laughing when I was reading it. |
| ab.ritzgogoi chapter 5 . 1/15/2015 crap you wasted tym on useless conversation n didn't even wrote the main part |
| arya-demon4-bloodmoon chapter 5 . 3/22/2014 Hey, nice story. I would very much like it if you continue this story. It is very original. Peace and Love my friend. |
| Electricboa chapter 5 . 8/9/2013 I have to day, I really enjoy the premise of the story. I have no idea why, but I always like to see what kind of reactions Hyppolyta and the other Amazons have to Diana falling in love with Batman. I got a good laugh out of Philippus reading gossip magazines and saving Brad Pitt's picture from Artemis. There are a couple things I think you could work on in the way of writing. First, you seem to continually switch back and forth between present and past tense for your actions. Generally speaking, it's usually supposed to be past tense, especially in a third person story. The other thing I noticed was every now and then you'd leave out a word or contraction when starting the sentence with the word "I." Something like "I prepare the milk right away sir," from Chapter 2 should be "I will" or "I'll" (and there should be a comma before "Sir"). I think most of it could be caught with a proofread or two, maybe a Beta if that doesn't help. |
| judy chapter 5 . 8/4/2013 Love your story please don't stop. Keep going! |
| The Forgotten Silent Maiden chapter 1 . 6/30/2013 Great story please continue love the part with Ace so cute |
| Hapless-Ace chapter 5 . 6/24/2013 A transforming Batmobile named after the tank from The Dark Knight series? Yes just yes |
| alldifferentallsame chapter 5 . 6/5/2013 love it please continue! |
