Omg loved it

I can't stop laughing...Poor Hunter!And is this Jake that Jake from ND?Or this is just a coincidence?

Can I have the hot, rough sex sequel? Please?

hot. your a good writer, you should write the sex & the blowjob into a sequel it'd be super-mega-sexy-foxey-hot

YES I'm pretty sure this was my prompt thank you so much it was awesome omg hot kurtbastian sex ! You are perfect

i love it this fic, kurbastian is better

Well... There are some part that I found hard to understand. And I feel like if everything, I mean the plot, was going a little bit too fast. Like if you want all the story to happen in thirty second without taking time to properly write it. Maybe it's something you can work on. Your story could be so much better. Other than that, the plot was interesting... I like the idea, just need some more work. No offense ! Just thought it could help you improve your writing.

The idea is really good, and I think you have a lot of potential, but I would suggest researching a sport before you write it. It takes the reader out of the story if they have to try and figure out what you're describing. Also, I can't really imagine Kurt being happy with Sebastian punching his other best friend in the nose...it's not romantic, it's just violent. I don't want to discourage you, like I said you have A LOT of potential, but these are just some things to think about.

This is a lovely story! The way you structure your dialogue could use some work and I find it a little unbelievable that Kurt, as a virgin, would sleep with Sebastian minutes after they got together... But I loved it! Jealous!Sebastian is my new favourite! ;)

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WONDERFUL STORY!