I really like this. Can you do something like this for the episode mutiny.

Aww such a good ending, I'm glad yumi saps sorry to William and they had a talk about everything - u did an amazing job on this story well done! :)

Yay! I loved what you did after the episode's actual ending:)! The way Yumi and William talked about it. Really good story! - Yuoaj009

Awesome ending! You did an awesome job with this story! I hope you write another one!

Yay! Everything is alright:D! I liked the chapter;). - Yuoaj009

Oh really? It's not ending?! That's awesome! I can't wait!

I think this is my favourite chapter yet- it's so good I love it well done

Awesome! My favorite part of this episode is when Jeremy calls William his friend. I liked it because I knew it was the breaking point. Please write more!

It's not a cliffhanger anymore:). But you go William! Haha. Great chapter. Realization. Well described. I've to admit that you did so well on William's thoughts:). - Yuoaj009

Once again a magnificent chapter! William is slowly starting to listen to the voice! Uh oh. I can't wait to see what happens next. (Even though I've seen this episode. You get the picture?)

Great once again:)! I haven't got many other words. Yay, original..Anyway, it seems the end is near, if you're planning on only writing about William's thoughts in episode 15. -Yuoaj009

It gets better:). I'm glad that it doesn't lack the ability to hold on to one's attention. I mean it's so detailed and yet captivating. Good job once again! Luckily, I had seen the episode, otherwise it'd be different. Good luck on finishing the rest!

This story pulls the reader in. It's so interesting. I don't ever want to stop reading it. Great chapter.

Usually, I'm not a big fan of William. But this story is different. It's described so well. Good job! I hope he'll figure everything out soon:).

Awesome chapter or is it not a chapter? But I loved it! It was so powerful and passionate! It was basically what the episode was suppose to be about. Just awesome! Please write more!