Awwww! That was cute!

Sweet little story.

One little grammatical thing, though. When addressing someone over the course of a sentence (at the beginning/end/somewhere along the way) the name (or title, as it were) along with any additions are separated from the rest of the sentence with commas.
E.g. "How are you, Riza?" - "Hello, Sir, I'm fine." - "Dearest Riza, you're too formal."
When the person is mentioned, but not addressed, the commas are omitted. Same for "you".

Awwww :3 that was so cute w great job!

-Stori U-

cute XD

Sweet! I love that note from Havoc :)

So cute :3