Loved it! Read the whole thing at one sitting. Nice writing style.

A very romantic story! I loved the tender moments between Flint and Lady Jaye, such as when he was reading to her, and the proposal scene was cute and sweet. I also enjoyed the CG/BH interaction.

Fico feliz que todos eles voltaram para casa e estão seguros.

Please update

please continue

So glad everyone is coming home..
Cover Girl is ready to kill Beach Head but softens after seeing him would love to have read more about them once she goes to see him..

Flint and Lady Jaye perfect but I could have, would have loved to read more about them..

I need more Flint and Jaye

At first I thought poor Beach Head, but it looks like he comes out of this all right. Glad for the happy ending!

Bom capítulo! Eu gostei que Lady Jaye ficou congelada com o pedido de casamento de Flint aumentando o suspense. Eu pensei que talvez ela não aceitasse , tal era o suspense. Bom trabalho!

Nice update. You painted a great picture of the not-so-perfect proposal complete with fits and starts and a happy ending. Fingers crossed the mission goes well.

Oh I just love it - The ever confident always ready to quote something, Flint, was as tongue tide as could be..
However, in the end despite Lady Jaye's frozen state everything worked out..

squeal, you have them engaged, now bring the guys home safe and sound..

oh and I just love the Beach Head/ Wayne and Cover Girl/ Courtney moment.. I've always seen them as complex a couple as Flint and Lady Jaye.. Duke/Scarlett and Snake Eyes/Scarlett coupling was just to classic.. However the other two couplings just seem to need each other to be complete..

great, wonderful, super, delightful, and perfect update...

Excellent

Hmm, wonder what he has planned- have an idea, but will wait until you let us know! Enjoying your story and waiting for the next update.

oh ya Flint off kilter and whistling.. Could it be? oh i hope it is!

Courtney screaming back at and standing up to Wayne - Wow! she has got some guts.. Of course, we all know its just the way they show their love for one another.. They wouldn't be happy with it any other way...

Can't wait for the next update...

Great story so far. The beginning was so well paced that I was feeling frantic just reading. And this last chapter, well, have to read it again I think ;-) Can't wait to see where you take this. You've really described the characters so well. Just a suggestion that the font (I think it might be in bold) can be a little hard to read. And congrats on your daughter's first day of school.