Hey. This was great. You should continue it...

Your writing is beautiful, I could get lost in it. I absolutely love it! The lengthy sentences just add to its descriptive nature, but sometimes the words don't flow. I think it's because you often combine sentences that should be left separate. Another slight problem is the lack of paragraphs and over-use of ellipses which affect the flow. But other than those few flaws, your writing is perfect.

This. Is. A. MASTERPIECE!
There is so much emotion that you perfectly convey to the the readers. Impeccable writing. Just a few minor typos here and there.
Everything is just right. Your words are just right. I can totally imagine Adele's situation and inner turmoil.
Please update soon! It's too grandiose of a story to be left incomplete. I'm sure it'd be a best seller if you ever publish it into a real bool! I'll be waiting :)
Cheers

WHY WOULD YOU END LIKE THAT. I feel like a piece of me is dying. Please, please finish this.

great chapter! love it. but have to ask one thing; why so many '...'s. seriously, there are so many! but still love the book. when are you gonna update?

This was well written! You captured Adele's anguish perfectly, there were several places of vivid description, and I especially loved the touch (and very hot) flashback of Emma and Adele living together-it was a wonderful way to imagine their years which we don't see in the film.

BUT PLEASE DON'T STOP HERE THIS IS SUCH A CLIFFHANGER I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE OR GIVE US SOME CLOSURE

I love this so much! Please continue! This is amazing! I needed the closure after watching the film and this was very good at helping me get at it. But more!

Beautiful

This is the hottest thing ever. Please write more sex scenes. I loved it.

Hi! Please do continue your fanfic and write more chapters. Really looking forward to it!

Saw the movie this week and just like wanted more! Luckily found you fanfic. I like your writing. Hope you will continue story.

great writing!

I thought you did a very nice job. Can't wait for the next chapter.,

When's the next update gonna be? 'Cause I just love your story, it's really well written. I saw the movie and then read your story and I just can't get enough

Ps: Sorry for my mistakes in english, I'm French...

I desperately want to see that movie, like r-e-a-l-l-y want to see it..
Since I can't yet, I have found your story. Despite it's a relief to my not so patient waiting period, it's really greatly written. I don't know how else to describe it, it is perfect. It's like you're the impersonation of the troubled phychology of a teenager in love..

I just really want to see whatever more you have for it!