Wowowowowowowowow. I've never been shocked by a fanfic. You just took the freaking cake, and I mean ALL OF IT. God, that's sick. Terrible.
I'd love to say how great this story is (I'm supppppossssed to be studyinnnng), because it truly is, but I'm way too shocked for that now.

This story is so powerful. I had no idea I would like Aang and Zuko as brothers so much, but wow, the way you write their relationship is beautiful. How you write Zuko is especially spot on for his character. I agree he would have been a great older brother to someone not maniacalThe dynamic between the brothers, and them each with Ozai... you’ve written something really moving here. I’ve read it twice now, and it definitely ranks among my favorites. Thank you for finishing off the story, even if just in tid-bit form; so much better than just leaving it completely undone. Anyway, kudos! I love it!

Sad that it couldn't be finished. This would have been the best fanfiction I had ever read, if it were completed properly. As it is, it's very good. I'm hoping that one day you could write the rest, this last re-cap chapter left A LOT still on the table, and is pretty confusing. As that may be, it is still an amazing premise and idea.

Aww I'm sad it had to end early but I understand. Thank you so much for doing a finishing chapter with key scenes to tie up loose ends! That's more than a lot of people do :) yes, good. Oh this is "WhyTho" I decided to finally log in to review, in case you wanted to tell me to quit spamming you by reviewing every other chapter :)

omg god bless you. To this day I try looking for fanfiction that gives Zuko an actual sibling relationship with any of the other members of team avatar, Toph, Sokka,Aang, but there is barely any.

T_T

Loved

Fuck Pakku. No, seriously. That was not okay. You don't do that to kids who've been abused, especially not at the level Aang and Zuko were. It's not right, and it's shitty. They've been traumatized enough, there is absolutely NO justification for making them think that their abuser is still out there, waiting for them. None. It's a shitty thing to do; they're already fucked up and terrified of Ozai, and Pakku was a bastard to do that, even if it was a joke. ESPECIALLy if it was a joke. That's fucked up.
Now that I'm done with my rant, I really liked this piece. I liked the Zuko/Aang brother thing, and you wrote it really well. I'd like to see more, but that is, of course, at your discretion.
Fuck Pakku.

Ya, i like it.

YES! KEEP GOING! Pleeeeaaaaassssee!:)

Can I just say you killed me brought me back to life then stabbed me in the feels. That was a AWESOME story and leaves me wanting a sequel

Aww... child abuse (well, you did warn me!) I feel soooo sorryfor Aang right about now :)
Keep writing, this is awesome!

I love this story,I've been reading it and waiting patintly for its update, this is the kind of stories I like and write, in one zuko and aang are brothers in another zuko and toph and another zuko and toph and aang, keep up the good work, I love reading fanfictions similar to mine, it was a shame that I ended this way, but althought I'm eleven I totally understand, good luck at your job and collage and school...theres a fic. that I wrote named on the runway it is somehow similar to this I hope you read it I would like a review of a master

That was a beautiful story

This was a terrifyingly beautiful story. I'm not sure if I want to thank or curse you.