| Reviews for Intrusion |
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  zion chapter 9 . 4/17/2017 I love it well kind of quite sad about where he had to kill himself to save everyone but it was ballistic |
 Angry Time Lady chapter 8 . 1/25/2017 great fanfic! one of the best i've read. |
| Dew That Is Blue chapter 7 . 12/31/2015 Ooohhhh nuuu this is so amazing! Please update! I really wanna see what happens next. |
| Joh Tanner chapter 7 . 10/29/2015 Alright, first things first, you need to make more chapters. Second, The Dalek that killed Ward should be killed by May and Skye. Skye should be reveled as a time lord after being shot by a Dalek and regenerating. Ward should be turned into a Dalek, and, finally, Coulson should tea up with the Doctor to take on the Supreme Dalek. Phil Couldon should be carrying a sonic bazooka and/or sonic canon. The Doctor should have a sonic tank in his TARDIS and take on a Dalek army because they have captured Clara and Skye. Hope you take my suggestion! Also, great book! |
| FORD B chapter 7 . 3/6/2015 Great chapter! And cliffhanger! |
| The-Pug's-Quill chapter 4 . 12/8/2014 That's hilarious! You're a good writer. I love this story so much! |
| The-Pug's-Quill chapter 1 . 12/8/2014 Great first chapter and explanations why they couldn't get in the TARDIS! |
| OleDWFan chapter 7 . 11/24/2014 I never liked Ward tbh, keep up the great writing! |
| OleDWFan chapter 1 . 11/24/2014 Okay... you win. I loved your dig at Mel with the carrot juice diet. |
| WhySoSirius7582934 chapter 7 . 10/1/2014 This is a fantastic story. Please update again soon. |
| Katescats chapter 7 . 8/10/2014 Hi just read your story it was good can't wait for the next chapter. |
| BenRG chapter 7 . 7/25/2014 When HAVE the DALEKs messed around? Although, depending on the era and caste, they are occasionally capable of curiosity. So it was just possible that it might have wanted to dissect this strange creature that actually thought it could threaten it. |
| Lizeyli chapter 7 . 6/9/2014 No! Cliffhanger! But other than that, AMAZING story! |
| korrd chapter 2 . 6/5/2014 How did they open the door? You never explained that. You just said one of the SHIELD agents was an expert on biology. It would take a lot more then a few samples and a biologist's, no matter how gifted, attempts to mimic an alien she has never seen before to convince the TARDIS to open up. |
| Geeky-MikaBoo chapter 7 . 6/4/2014 DAMN! Jeez Ward that's what you get for being a cocky SoB! Can't wait to see what happens next. |
